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XXkoluluXX Newb
Joined: 04 Oct 2007 Posts: 20
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:16 am Post subject: in the dark....i wrote tell me what u think |
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[color=indigo][color=darkred]IN [/color][color=red]THE [/color][color=orange]DARK[/color] [color=brown]HE[/color] [color=yellow]AWAITS[/color] [color=green]TO[/color] [color=olive]TASTE[/color] [color=cyan]MY[/color] [color=blue]HEART,[/color] [color=darkblue]THROW[/color] [color=indigo]MY [/color][color=violet]WINDOW, [/color][color=black]INTO[/color] [color=darkred]MY[/color] [color=red]ROOM, [/color][color=orange]STAB[/color] [color=brown]ME [/color][color=yellow]WITH[/color] [color=green]A[/color] [color=olive]BROKEN[/color] BROOM![/color][b]
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It's sucks i don't like it... [/color] [/b] |
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Gothic_Vampire_Empath Newb
Joined: 03 Jun 2005 Posts: 5
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 7:43 pm Post subject: |
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Actually, it is quite good. Are you going to add on to it? If you choose not to, it is still a worthy piece! I really enjoy the simpleness of it. If you'd enjoy a blow-by-blow concerning your spelling-i.e.-throw=through-then I would be delighted to assist! Keep it up! Yours, Empath |
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Zenshii Rookie
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 25
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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Very interesting _________________ Muffins are just ugly cupcakes, but we love them anyway.
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