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Gothic_Vampire_Empath Newb
Joined: 03 Jun 2005 Posts: 5
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:05 pm Post subject: Empaths' Original Poetry |
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[color=green]Swirling masses all around me, trying to pull me in, black and liquid… make me think it’d be good just to drown. To melt all my troubles and worries away, to not have to worry about another day…liquid fire burns as it races through my veins, it’s fear then death...they are here...they are here and I must let them in…mind numbing, body crushing, senses whirling away as my body floats, just floats…
Petals fall gently from the sky, caressing each limb on its decent…brushing past outstretched fingertips to land and drift onto a sweet face and fall, fall like the hot tears that slide across my pale cheeks. Pale like the cold and distant moon, cold like he was to her. Distant like she was to him, in return, no one wins…no one wants to lose his game so badly of love, or is it lust? A crush merely forgotten from long ago.
A whisper of a memory, a smell, and then it’s him and he’s there filling the space in front of, between, next to, and all around you. You’re breathing him in, drinking in his scent, that when you open your eyes to meet his gaze, he vanishes. Like the dream that once was, but not fully realized and finally lost.[/color]
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TheWolfsFang Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 26 Nov 2007 Posts: 991
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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Wow. I need to set up a Poetry class. You also need to write this in the Poetic Form, unless you wanted it to be in a paragraph form. I'll pm you how your Poem could/should look like. _________________ When all things end darkly,
That is when my bright work begins.
Death is all I know. |
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Zenshii Rookie
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 25
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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That's beautiful! _________________ Muffins are just ugly cupcakes, but we love them anyway.
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