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neorash Newb
Joined: 30 Aug 2007 Posts: 2
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 1:20 pm Post subject: Art help |
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Can any one tell me if anything needs fixing on this?I want it to look as much like the refrence as possible.
pic:
[url=http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suigintouwipud9.png][img=http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3083/suigintouwipud9.th.png][/url]
refrence:
[url=http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suigintourefrencevl2.png][img=http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6307/suigintourefrencevl2.th.png][/url] _________________ IMG]http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2428/hacksigpy3.th.png[/IMG |
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luckycloverluck Very bored
Joined: 25 Oct 2007 Posts: 128
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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Face is unnaturally round---almost comically so---and reminds me of an orange for some reason. I suggest taking a look at a photo of a profile, then incorporating the shapes of a human face's side into the picture. It may seem like it won't look like your ref at first, but when you refine it a little, it most likely will.
Next, the hair. I think it's fine save for the bangs; hair isn't transparent. I suggest not trying to show the features beneath the bangs for realism.
The head decoration needs more detail and shape.
The boots need a bit more..."texturizing".
Other then that, a good start. With a bit of work, it'll be refined and ready in no time. _________________ It is the artist, not the fandom, that makes the picture worth it.
If you feel that the fandom is worthless, then fighting the urge to pass judgement on a picture based on that fandom is a rather good idea.
That is, of course, unless you want the fangirls/fanboys coming after you with foaming mouths.
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Trinity_Fire Forum Stalker
Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 1042
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 4:24 pm Post subject: |
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The head is waaaay bigger than the rest of the body.
Next time, print out a copy of the ref, and do your circles on there. It guarantees a much closer and more precise "copy" than if you randomly do circles by guessing. _________________ [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/user-Trinity_Fire.php][img]http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e326/MomentaryEternity/sig3.jpg[/img][/url][url=http://www.fanart-central.net/user_stories-Trinity_Fire.php][img]http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e326/MomentaryEternity/sig2.jpg[/img][/url] |
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neorash Newb
Joined: 30 Aug 2007 Posts: 2
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:07 am Post subject: |
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Alright, I'll try to do with those suggestions.As for the round face, is just the way I draw. |
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eeveelova4 Member
Joined: 09 Dec 2007 Posts: 84
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:53 pm Post subject: |
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over all...good jus wofk on head shape |
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eeveelova4 Member
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:54 pm Post subject: |
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work* |
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