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elyo11 Still very bored
Joined: 09 Aug 2005 Posts: 341
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:23 am Post subject: tips needed, if there are any. |
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http://elyo11.deviantart.com/art/Neuvo-Generacion-Espada-76184115
plzz, critique as much as possible. _________________ [img]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u247/Valariz/Ulquiorra1.png[/img]
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bishielover75 Forum Stalker
Joined: 20 Jun 2006 Posts: 1114 Location: the land of kawaii things
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:33 am Post subject: |
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Your poses are extremely stiff and everyone looks really uncomfortable. The chick in the skirt has no hips to speak of, her torso is too long, and her boob should be flatter on the top in a profile view (unless she has some sort of implant).
The hand right above the sword hilt on the bottom-- who does that hand belong to? |
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elyo11 Still very bored
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:15 am Post subject: |
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thnx for the tips^^ The hand belongs to the kid next to the girl small kid. _________________ [img]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u247/Valariz/Ulquiorra1.png[/img]
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