Logo
FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups  ProfileProfile   Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Log inLog in
tips needed, if there are any.

 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    www.fanart-central.net Forum Index -> Artistic Help
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
elyo11
Still very bored


Joined: 09 Aug 2005
Posts: 341

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:23 am    Post subject: tips needed, if there are any. Reply with quote

http://elyo11.deviantart.com/art/Neuvo-Generacion-Espada-76184115

plzz, critique as much as possible.
_________________
[img]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u247/Valariz/Ulquiorra1.png[/img]
Friendship is like a glass. Be carefull with it 'couse if you break it, it will be hard to repair.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
bishielover75
Forum Stalker


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 1114
Location: the land of kawaii things

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your poses are extremely stiff and everyone looks really uncomfortable. The chick in the skirt has no hips to speak of, her torso is too long, and her boob should be flatter on the top in a profile view (unless she has some sort of implant).

The hand right above the sword hilt on the bottom-- who does that hand belong to?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
elyo11
Still very bored


Joined: 09 Aug 2005
Posts: 341

PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thnx for the tips^^ The hand belongs to the kid next to the girl small kid.
_________________
[img]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u247/Valariz/Ulquiorra1.png[/img]
Friendship is like a glass. Be carefull with it 'couse if you break it, it will be hard to repair.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    www.fanart-central.net Forum Index -> Artistic Help All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum