What do you think?

[sabre]

Hey i just wanna know if anyone has anything to say about my pic so far.

[url]http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-676658.html

If anyone has advice just let me know plz. [/url]

[bishielover75]

It's fairly boring and doesn't hold my attention very much. At all. The back of his head appears to be missing but, most of all, his body is twisted at an impossible angle. His upper torso is facing a completely different direction than his lower torso. The background is a little too symmetrical for my tastes (maybe make one of the big trees smaller or add some more trees to one side?), and the blue skies fade to a darker blue as they get higher up. The perspective itself is fairly interesting, though. The shading could also be much more interesting, and there's no shading whatsoever on the pants.
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[London]

Am I the only one that sees a blank post?
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[bishielover75]

If you quote their post, you can see what they wrote. Don't know why it showed up as blank.
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[London]

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-676658.html

Ah, okay.

Somehow when I tried to post what I quoted, it blanked my post, too.
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[London]

[23:05] London: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-676658.html Is this pose copied from a manga page?
[23:06] Bored: Yep.
[23:06] London: o
[23:06] Bored: Or the anime.
[23:06] Bored: *shrug*
[23:06] Bored: Just finished that arc in the anime.
[23:06] Bored: He did it like
[23:06] Bored: 784932748237 times.
[23:06] Bored: Cause they're so slow
[23:06] Bored: and like to pan
[23:06] Bored: and switch between faces a whole fucking lot.
[23:06] London: k
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[London]

Only thing I have to add to what Joou said is his fingers look unusually thick.
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[sabre]

Thank u all for the help i will consider it in my nxt pic!!!
Oh his head is there its just his hair that makes it look like that!

[luckycloverluck]

I second everything Bishielover and London pointed out. As for the hair, you could give it more definition in the back, and the background needs a bit more diversity (changing tones in the sky, variation in the rocks and shrubs, etc.). Also, you need to shade [i]every[/i] part of the drawing; not doing so makes the drawing looked rushed and incomplete, in my opinion.
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[Jedi]

The hair needs some highlights, to give it better definition, in this piece. Also, you need to learn more about shading in certain angles/views, like the one you drew there. Some parts of it need to be dark, to show he's being looked at from below and up. Am I making sense, or just being inane?
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[sabre]

Thankyou i will use this help on my next pic

[cassydiddles]

hey i think if you add some clouds into the sky it will look more interesting