I swear, SOMETHING is off...

[luckycloverluck]

[img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8481/horsenymphroughcopyyw2.png[/img]

Latest project, horse kemenomini. Don't mind the crappy lining; 'tis a rough sketch, I can fix it later, I just need help with the dang anatomy...>.<

The face is concerning me, mainly the eyes, nose and mouth. Help?
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"But Miss Lefae!"
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[London]

[img]http://i26.tinypic.com/2j35u2c.png[/img]
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[luckycloverluck]

Aye, thank you.

Edit: Okay, round two. This still looks like a piece of meat a dog coughed up in my opinion, but hopefully, I can get it looking [i]somewhat[/i] human. Once again, ignore the lining; 'tis a rough sketch.

[img]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9231/horsenymphround2ha5.png[/img]
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It is the artist, not the fandom, that makes the picture worth it.

If you feel that the fandom is worthless, then fighting the urge to pass judgement on a picture based on that fandom is a rather good idea.

That is, of course, unless you want the fangirls/fanboys coming after you with foaming mouths.
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"Thy pen is mightier then thy sword."
"But Miss Lefae!"
"THOU SHALT NOT FORGETETH THAT, PUNKETH!!"

[falkonns_flight]

London gave a really, really good example. Basically, the length of the nose should equal the length of distance from the eyes to the top of the forehead. The eyes themselves, should be spaced an "eyelength" apart. And the corners of the mouth should line up with the center, or at least line up almost the center, of the eyes themselves
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Trespassers will be shot. Survivors will be shot again...as well it should be. If you're not sure it's dead, put a bunch more holes in it, should fix the problem...

[luckycloverluck]

[quote="falkonns_flight"]London gave a really, really good example. Basically, the length of the nose should equal the length of distance from the eyes to the top of the forehead. The eyes themselves, should be spaced an "eyelength" apart. And the corners of the mouth should line up with the center, or at least line up almost the center, of the eyes themselves [/quote]

Thanks, I'll remember that.
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It is the artist, not the fandom, that makes the picture worth it.

If you feel that the fandom is worthless, then fighting the urge to pass judgement on a picture based on that fandom is a rather good idea.

That is, of course, unless you want the fangirls/fanboys coming after you with foaming mouths.
+++++++++++++++++++
"Thy pen is mightier then thy sword."
"But Miss Lefae!"
"THOU SHALT NOT FORGETETH THAT, PUNKETH!!"