need C&C on my work

kitsune_pup · Member Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Posts: 51

I'm not really popular, so it's really rare for me to get any critiques on my work...those who DO comment usually just say "so kiwaii!" so I'd really appreciate some real critique (but please be nice, I'm still and amateur)

(since it's more than one picture, I'll just put the links)

1.) this picture I am most proud of, but I'd still like some critiques on it so I can still improve
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/silk_and_lace_colored_by_KitsunePup.jpg

2.) In this one, coloring is an issue (I used colored pencils) and I'd love it if someone who is good with color pencils could give me so advice. Also, I don't feel like everything is all right with her anatomy...any help?
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/pinup2.jpg

3.) Another one that I'm rather proud of, but would still like help. Also, more help with the color pencil thing most of the issues with this one are my scanner problems (unlike #2 where I just screwed up with the coloring all together)
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/dog.jpg

4.) In this one, please try not to focus too much on the coloring because I used sharpies, and a bad scanner, and try to focus on critiquing the drawing itself (btw, it's tracy from Hairspray)
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/milkshake_by_KitsunePup.jpg

5.) (nudity warning) I'd love critique over anything in this please
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/flutter_colored_by_KitsunePup.jpg

6.) This one is my only realism picture, so I'd REALLY appreciate some critique on this one.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/dog_by_KitsunePup.jpg

7.) the main thing I'd like help with on this picture is the coloring...I'm terrible with photoshop, so some pointers would be really appreciated
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/rainbowvomit/balloon_colored_by_KitsunePup.jpg

thanks everyone

gamefox120 · Very bored Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 233

1. I suggest that you blur the edges of your drawing so it will fit in with the back ground or you could blur the whole image VERY carefully I usually just get the blur tool up to a big pixel setting so is nice and even.

2. every thing here looks ok but She seems kinda short
I would give longer legs. also the hand grasping the hat looks kinda weird
but over all a good pic

3. all that I see that is off is that she looks like she is about to tip over
to the right just slide her left leg out so it would look like it was supporting her weight.

4. first I would like to say nice job on the likeness
the only mistake i can tell is the left arm is cut at the elbow
so I would erase some of that to show it was connected.
5. wheres the pic?

6. The only major flaw is his right eye looks abnormal every thing else looks ok.
although i guess more high lights wouldn't hurt but thats your desicion

7.good pose, just blur it a bit and it should all come together

I hope I was able too help
keep up the good work.

kitsune_pup · Member Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Posts: 51

thank you sooooo much, I'll try to fix those things, you've been very helpful...as for the picture that didn't show...It's because I uploaded it on Photobucket.com and it violated the nudity rules (oops ^_^U)
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kitsune_pup · Member Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Posts: 51

thank you sooooo much, I'll try to fix those things, you've been very helpful...as for the picture that didn't show...It's because I uploaded it on Photobucket.com and it violated the nudity rules (oops ^_^U)
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