Critique Please?

[desertbreeze]

I personally think that this is by far my best work ever but I'd like some critique so I know what to work on:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-704855.html

[luckycloverluck]

To me, the mist could be less concentrated, and a bit more blurry. The words could be a bit more faded, or the figures in the back could be. Glow for the background creatures would also be a nice touch, in my opinion.

Otherwise, simplistic and neat. I like it.
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