My Trilogy of epicness

[Nyte]

well im currently working on a trilogy that once finished (if ever) should be somewhat like the inheritance cycle of eragon but its an original story but i might be incorperating mythology of everywhere into it but make it real so it will be epic but anyway please check out what i got so far and id like some feedback here is the second story beginning http://www.fanart-central.net/story-53412.html and the first as a short story (soon rewritten to be on scale with other 2) http://www.fanart-central.net/story-53411.html and the third is going to be kept under wraps until the first and second are finished/ rewritten but it is looking to be the best out of the three (may cause brain melting/explosion/imploding/E.D./diarrhea/dyslexia/necrosis/psychosis/etc. ...yea its that epic)

btw i have to a conclusion that i myself alone cannot hope to complete this project in three lifetimes so if anyone is interested let me know