View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Message |
aquaeevee Forum contributor
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 770 Location: just southwest of sod off, a little past sign say noobly people parking, 5 tics from the asylum
|
Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:30 pm Post subject: story ; pokemorph, please critique |
|
|
please give my story critique. just be polite about it for gods sake. _________________ with this frame of mind you better pray i never get a point of view gun, too late i just did. just pray i dont aim at you then! |
|
Back to top |
|
|
Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13710 Location: Moo
|
Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:23 am Post subject: |
|
|
A quick summary and URL to the story in question would be nice. _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
[size=9]Disclaimer: Posts may contain URLs. Click [url=http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TVTropesWillRuinYourLife]at your own risk.[/url][/size] |
|
Back to top |
|
|
aquaeevee Forum contributor
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 770 Location: just southwest of sod off, a little past sign say noobly people parking, 5 tics from the asylum
|
Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 2:14 pm Post subject: |
|
|
my bad, can do bossman _________________ with this frame of mind you better pray i never get a point of view gun, too late i just did. just pray i dont aim at you then! |
|
Back to top |
|
|
aquaeevee Forum contributor
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 770 Location: just southwest of sod off, a little past sign say noobly people parking, 5 tics from the asylum
|
Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 2:18 pm Post subject: |
|
|
team rocket has been up to its old tricks again and created pokemon morphed with humans to create a new breed of trainer. this goes very wrong. Now the mewmorph Meka must do whatever is nessasry to stop this new threat to the pokemon world...
please understand that im still introducing the characters and still have 2 or 3 more to introduce in this book which is currently on an inbound flight to chapter 4
http://www.fanart-central.net/story-50734.html _________________ with this frame of mind you better pray i never get a point of view gun, too late i just did. just pray i dont aim at you then! |
|
Back to top |
|
|
|