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Please critique my story!!! I really need it!!!

 
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CatiJoy
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:53 am    Post subject: Please critique my story!!! I really need it!!! Reply with quote

Hey. I wrote an original story. It's called "Candy Girl". It's a magical girl story that's heavily influenced by Sailor Moon and Tokyo Mew Mew. I want to post it on FictionPress, but I don't think it's good enough yet, so I posted it here. I'd really like for people to critique my story and tell me what it needs because I realy want to make it good enough. Thanks!

http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-89629.html
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