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		wolfheart7 My First Post!
  
  Joined: 30 Dec 2008 Posts: 1
 
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				 Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:57 pm    Post subject: Umm, well my first poem on this site. | 
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				This poem is loosely based on one of my best poems that I, uh, forgot;
 
 
 
                    [size=18]Live[/size]
 
 
The world may drag you down
 
Still stand and fight 
 
For [color=darkred]life[/color] has many meanings
 
Found in the strangest places.
 
A late flower sprouting in the gutter of a frosted road
 
It still fights against the white and cold.
 
A baby's cry announcing its will to [color=darkred]live[/color].
 
I ask you to go out and search.
 
For it may be easier on the straight paved road,
 
but on the winding backroads is where [color=darkred]life[/color] truly is.
 
[color=darkred]Live!!![/color] 
 
MY brothers and sisters in this life so chaotic,
 
Let us [size=17][color=darkred]live!!!!![/color][/size] | 
			 
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		Firiel Has No Life
  
  Joined: 13 Feb 2012 Posts: 620
 
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				 Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:17 am    Post subject:  | 
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				"A late flower sprouting in the gutter of a frosted road
 
It still fights against the white and cold."
 
 
I like that bit. It puts a picture in my head... crunchy, spiky white frost-patterns clinging to green leaves, petals yellow like sunshine beginning to wither, then defiantly spreading and healing again, turning toward the sky. | 
			 
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		Jadis Still very bored
  
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				 Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:05 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				| I wonder what wandering back road you are living on now. | 
			 
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