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wolfheart7 My First Post!
Joined: 30 Dec 2008 Posts: 1
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:57 pm Post subject: Umm, well my first poem on this site. |
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This poem is loosely based on one of my best poems that I, uh, forgot;
[size=18]Live[/size]
The world may drag you down
Still stand and fight
For [color=darkred]life[/color] has many meanings
Found in the strangest places.
A late flower sprouting in the gutter of a frosted road
It still fights against the white and cold.
A baby's cry announcing its will to [color=darkred]live[/color].
I ask you to go out and search.
For it may be easier on the straight paved road,
but on the winding backroads is where [color=darkred]life[/color] truly is.
[color=darkred]Live!!![/color]
MY brothers and sisters in this life so chaotic,
Let us [size=17][color=darkred]live!!!!![/color][/size] |
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Firiel Has No Life
Joined: 13 Feb 2012 Posts: 620
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:17 am Post subject: |
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"A late flower sprouting in the gutter of a frosted road
It still fights against the white and cold."
I like that bit. It puts a picture in my head... crunchy, spiky white frost-patterns clinging to green leaves, petals yellow like sunshine beginning to wither, then defiantly spreading and healing again, turning toward the sky. |
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Jadis Still very bored
Joined: 08 Dec 2014 Posts: 337
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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I wonder what wandering back road you are living on now. |
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