Sakura (Naruto)

Battou · Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 1:30 pm Post subject: Sakura (Naruto)

Something don't look right on this one. Anyone see anything?

I've already noticed the hair error in her bangs and marked it with a redline but there is more to it than that I Know it.....

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London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

If I redlined, none of your original lines would be left. Get a photoref and start over. :V
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Battou · Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 3:24 pm Post subject:

This was photo refed, log into your YIM.
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London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Nah. I'm at home and I'd rather my family not think I liked looking at pencil drawings of young girls in their underwear.
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SolarisAugmentium · Forum Stalker Joined: 25 Jun 2009 Posts: 1155

lol jailbait
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SweetxinsanityxSarah · Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:18 pm Post subject:

Hmm let's see. Her face is a lil too pointed towards the end, puff it up a tiny bit more. her hair is ok looking IMO. But just to be safe make it abit more stylish and flowing.

Her form could be alil more curvy and thin out her tummy some. Plus put in some clevage, guys love the clevage, hey its fanart xD

Her hands need some work too, yes hands are evil I know trust me. Dx
Maybe raise one of the shoulders up a tad bit so it makes her have a playful appearence.

Hope this info helps though doubt you will take it into consideration xP
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Brianhjh · Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:35 am Post subject:

That's an incredibly shallow forehead.
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