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Malosis555 Member
Joined: 20 May 2010 Posts: 69
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 9:07 am Post subject: Need some Criticism |
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It seems wherever I go, no one wants to give me any honest oppinions on my art, so I was hoping this time it would be different. On another note, I'm sorry this leads to Deviantart. My artwork is still pending on this sight, so please take a look at these samples and give me some hints.
......................Just be really, really gentle! Kay! I just got the courage to post my art.
Nothing too hurtful like 'This plucking sucks!"
[url=http://raiu-chan.deviantart.com/art/Mimi-s-wedding-163820612]Mimi (from Digimon)[/url]
[url=http://raiu-chan.deviantart.com/art/Is-it-Ariel-163820299]Ariel (From The Little Mermaid)[/url]
[url=http://raiu-chan.deviantart.com/art/It-s-TINK-163819901]Sexy Tinkerbell[/url]
Oh and I do these all in blue pen. It's my thing I guess. Pencil just feels too awkward for me. |
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SweetxinsanityxSarah Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 01 Jan 2007 Posts: 6829 Location: 20th Ward
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 9:10 am Post subject: |
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I do like the Aerial, however tink need's a tiny bit of work with her eyes, as in she needs more prominent eyelashes. Also the first link; the file isent found.
Other than that you are a really good artist hun. :3 _________________ Our life is made by the death of others...
~Leonardo Da Vinci |
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Malosis555 Member
Joined: 20 May 2010 Posts: 69
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 9:15 am Post subject: |
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[quote="SweetxinsanityxSarah"]I do like the Aerial, however tink need's a tiny bit of work with her eyes, as in she needs more prominent eyelashes. Also the first link; the file isent found.
Other than that you are a really good artist hun. :3[/quote]
Thanks for taking a look and ignoring the link trouble I'm having. I needed that.
Yeah, Tink's eyes do look weird now that I look at them. Thankies so much! |
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luckylace222 Site Helper
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 1545 Location: Baby Fishy
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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First, I'd like to say that I like how smooth your lines are. I sketch and make a lot of stray marks when I draw with pen. I'm just really into clean looks like in "Mimi's Wedding."
You've got good talent. I like how you draw the hair.
Mimi: Her left eye is too stretched across the face. Either move the right more towards the center, or make the eyes bigger. A lot of neck lines do not start on the very side of her face. The way her head is facing, the neck should start on her right cheek instead of her left.
Ariel: BEAUTIFUL, love the hatching. Although, her lips is strange, or is her mouth open? Those light body guidelines are a little distracting.
Tink: I actually like her exaggerated slanty eyes a lot. It makes her look devious, and different then the giant, wide eyed innocent characters. The lower-arm fold should be over the underarm fold. Her wings are unevenly elevated. No eyebrows....I don't know if that was on purpose. It doesn't really bother me that much though.
All and all, you are still a good artist with some anatomical errors to fix. ;P Good luck!! _________________ [size=10]“Far better is it to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checked by failure...than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in a gray twilight that knows not victory nor defeat.” ~Theodore Roosevelt [/size] |
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Malosis555 Member
Joined: 20 May 2010 Posts: 69
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Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:14 am Post subject: |
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[quote="luckylace222"]First, I'd like to say that I like how smooth your lines are. I sketch and make a lot of stray marks when I draw with pen. I'm just really into clean looks like in "Mimi's Wedding."
You've got good talent. I like how you draw the hair.
Mimi: Her left eye is too stretched across the face. Either move the right more towards the center, or make the eyes bigger. A lot of neck lines do not start on the very side of her face. The way her head is facing, the neck should start on her right cheek instead of her left.
Ariel: BEAUTIFUL, love the hatching. Although, her lips is strange, or is her mouth open? Those light body guidelines are a little distracting.
Tink: I actually like her exaggerated slanty eyes a lot. It makes her look devious, and different then the giant, wide eyed innocent characters. The lower-arm fold should be over the underarm fold. Her wings are unevenly elevated. No eyebrows....I don't know if that was on purpose. It doesn't really bother me that much though.
All and all, you are still a good artist with some anatomical errors to fix. ;P Good luck!![/quote]
Thanks a lot for the advice. I really appreciate the comments on my artwork even when I looked your gallery and HOLY FUDGE YOU ARE TALENTED! Thankies a ton! |
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Silent_Writer Newb
Joined: 14 Jun 2010 Posts: 12
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:31 am Post subject: |
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I absolutely adore your artwork deary! <3
Hehe, don't worry about it, you've obviously gone a long way comparing to me. There are only the small typical errors that every artist will make at some point.
I suggest trying to shade. Not sure about colour, but try to shade. |
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setzaroth Cold Warrior
Joined: 03 Jul 2007 Posts: 1960
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:39 am Post subject: |
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you didnt post it here? |
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