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FallenRaindrops
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 6:39 am    Post subject: Bloody Waters Reply with quote

Bloody Waters
I Die Amongst The Blood Red Waters
The Bodys Drifting At My Feet
I Try To Scream But Im Already Gone
Drifting Down The Bloody Waters
Again I Try To Scream
But Now I Know All Hope Is Gone

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setzaroth
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

why is all the poetry I read....well

self destructive, immature and downright emo...
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Yvette
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well. To say it lightly, everyone has a different opinion on how the world around them is perceived. Poetry is all about the way the author is looking at it.

Say you look at a falling leaf. You might see the beauty in its drifting whereas I might see the turn of season. Its all about how you look at it. Poetry is nothing more than the expression of one's soul and how you feel about a particular something.
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Firiel
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, but is "bodys" supposed to be "body's" (contraction of body is, meaning probably the poet's own body) or "bodies" (plural, meanign the poet is dying in a mass tragedy)?
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luckylace222
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now I have a real challenge for you as a poet.

Write a happy poem.
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