The End Of A Girl's World

xNickx · Newb Joined: 28 Jun 2010 Posts: 7

She comes home from another bad day
When she arrives, nobody is there.
When will things begin to turn her way?
The scars on her arms: no one's aware.

It's time to wash the feelings away.
The warm skin clashes with the cold blade,
As the burning tears run down her face.
All of the scars symbolize self hate
Will her world end today?

You said you wouldn't just let them win
People make fun of you all the time
Stand up; don't let them hurt you again
Forget their words; let them slip your mind
They're just jealous; don't listen to them

I wish I had the chance to save you.

It's time to wash the feelings away.
The warm skin clashes with the cold blade,
As the burning tears run down her face.
All of the scars symbolize self hate
Will her world end today?

As the final slits rip through her flesh,
Blood gushes out of the open cuts.
Spilling to the floor, it looks so fresh.
As she falls down, her eyes slowly shut.

She just couldn't take it anymore.
Gave it all up and dropped to the floor.
Her world is over forever more.

SweetxinsanityxSarah · Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:59 pm Post subject:

Very nice. Love the clever rhyming.
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xNickx · Newb Joined: 28 Jun 2010 Posts: 7

Thanks! [quote="SweetxinsanityxSarah"]Very nice. Love the clever rhyming.[/quote]

setzaroth · Cold Warrior Joined: 03 Jul 2007 Posts: 1960

Can anyone write poetry that isnt juvenile and emo?