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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:45 pm    Post subject: Followed Home Reply with quote

It's late at night, and a little girl has to walk home.
Little does she know, she's not alone.
Slowly but surely, a man follows behind.
The stranger whispers "This girl is mine."
Rain pours down harder and harder
As the man gets even closer.
She turns around, and is scared for her life.
The man starts to sprint, tightly holding his knife.

Tonight's the night he ends her life
And leaves her dead body under a streetlight.
Raped and killed, she comes to an end
Nobody can save her now, my friend.

By now, she's running as fast as she can.
But still, she's not to far from the man.
She's starting to slow down as he gains speed
And suddenly the girls trips on her own feet.
All of a sudden, the distance starts to close.

Tonight's the night he ends her life
And leaves her dead body under a streetlight.
Raped and killed, she comes to an end
Nobody can save her now, my friend.

The man slows down and approaches the girl.
With the intentions to end her world.
As he grabs her, she makes one last yelp.
But nobody's around to hear her cry for help.

With no one around to save this girl
An unknown man put an end to her world.
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SweetxinsanityxSarah
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woah intense. Much kudos.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you Very HappyD
SweetxinsanityxSarah wrote:
Woah intense. Much kudos.
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setzaroth
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, inspiration for a good metal song. But id turn it around a bit.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank youu. :]
setzaroth wrote:
Hmmm, inspiration for a good metal song. But id turn it around a bit.
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