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xNickx Newb
Joined: 28 Jun 2010 Posts: 7
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:45 pm Post subject: Followed Home |
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It's late at night, and a little girl has to walk home.
Little does she know, she's not alone.
Slowly but surely, a man follows behind.
The stranger whispers "This girl is mine."
Rain pours down harder and harder
As the man gets even closer.
She turns around, and is scared for her life.
The man starts to sprint, tightly holding his knife.
Tonight's the night he ends her life
And leaves her dead body under a streetlight.
Raped and killed, she comes to an end
Nobody can save her now, my friend.
By now, she's running as fast as she can.
But still, she's not to far from the man.
She's starting to slow down as he gains speed
And suddenly the girls trips on her own feet.
All of a sudden, the distance starts to close.
Tonight's the night he ends her life
And leaves her dead body under a streetlight.
Raped and killed, she comes to an end
Nobody can save her now, my friend.
The man slows down and approaches the girl.
With the intentions to end her world.
As he grabs her, she makes one last yelp.
But nobody's around to hear her cry for help.
With no one around to save this girl
An unknown man put an end to her world. |
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SweetxinsanityxSarah Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 01 Jan 2007 Posts: 6829 Location: 20th Ward
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:38 am Post subject: |
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Woah intense. Much kudos. _________________ Our life is made by the death of others...
~Leonardo Da Vinci |
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xNickx Newb
Joined: 28 Jun 2010 Posts: 7
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:59 am Post subject: |
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Thank you D [quote="SweetxinsanityxSarah"]Woah intense. Much kudos.[/quote] |
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setzaroth Cold Warrior
Joined: 03 Jul 2007 Posts: 1960
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:15 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, inspiration for a good metal song. But id turn it around a bit. |
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xNickx Newb
Joined: 28 Jun 2010 Posts: 7
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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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Thank youu. :] [quote="setzaroth"]Hmmm, inspiration for a good metal song. But id turn it around a bit.[/quote] |
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