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orianajones Very bored
Joined: 07 Nov 2005 Posts: 135
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 6:12 pm Post subject: is this a decent plot line start? |
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[b]If I were in your shoes plot line.[/b]
I plan to make Billy the main character of the story. But I also plan to swap point of views at some parts of the story.
Part one – billy joins a chat site. This is in her pov. She starts talking to this guy. when she gets offline she has to take care of her 7 siblings. she lives in australia and her family doesnt have much of a income.
Part two – skyler pov. he lives in america with his rich family. his parents ague a lot though.
Part three – Billys school and social life.
Part four – older brothers are acting suspicious.
Part five – new guy at school... from america.
Part six – Lacey (5 years old) catches her older brothers with drugs and gets severely injured. billy tries to stop the fight and gets cought in the middle with mild injuries. |
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Bowiegranap2 Newb
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:53 am Post subject: |
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Australia has one of the most expensive internet connections in the world.
If she has 7 siblings to take care of and doesn't have much of an income, why on earth does she have an internet connection and spending time on a chatroom? |
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orianajones Very bored
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:18 am Post subject: |
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well i kind of got the idea from my current living erangements.
we have five people living here. we did have more but they recently moved out. no-one had a job so things are tight. but as you can see we still managed to have the internet.
There is actually a company that gives 500gig for $60 a month aswell.
Does that make much sence? |
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luckylace222 Site Helper
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 1545 Location: Baby Fishy
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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I like a story if there is bear malling or the random adventurous kungfu battle. If you add some of that in there, I swear your story will get the Pulitzer Prize! _________________ [size=10]“Far better is it to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checked by failure...than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in a gray twilight that knows not victory nor defeat.” ~Theodore Roosevelt [/size] |
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orianajones Very bored
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 1:35 am Post subject: |
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i was actually planning to add rape and murder in it |
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