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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 4:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

here it is send me yours as well K...



CHAPTER ONE
THE BOOK OF GOD'S

Lain and Rin where walking to the public library together after school. They Found an old book called "THE LAND OF THE SEVEN GOD'S" they read the First line in the book together then they where both pulled in to the book! Their Friend Laurie saw what happen she was frightened she ran home. Kara was just wasting the day away in the bathtub when her sister Laurie came in to the bath Room crying. "What's wrong?" She asked. "I gust saw Lain and Rin get sucked
In to a book and I don't know how to get them back." she said in a desperate Voice "I need help. Help me please." "All right I'll help just let me finish my Bath OK?" "No right now or I'll tell mom about your boy friend." "You wouldnt dare." "You want to bet Mom." "NO DON'T! Where are they at?" "At the library" "OK let's go!" So they were off on an avenger they did not Know what was going to happen but they new only one thing which was they
had to save their friends.

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`Lain landed a way from Rin but Lain didn't know that. Lain did not
know what had happen. So she went looking for her. "Hay looks what we have here." Said a wicked voice. "Whose there?" she asked. Then two men came out of the shadows and pined her down. She struggled to get free but she couldn't. They took off all her close and raped her.

Rin found her self in a bed she was scared. She saw a guy sitting next to her. Then she remembered about Lain. The man said "stay calm you'll be all right." "Was there any body next to me when you found me?" she asked. The man sitting next to her said, "no there wasn't way do you ask?"


"My friend and I where pulled in here. But don't know where I am or how we got here. By the way what's your name?" "My name is Tamahomoa call me Tom. What's you're friend's name? You are at the palace." "Her name is Lain. Please help me find
Her Tomahome please." She said desperately.

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"So what we can't find them they palpable went home." Said Kara. "I
wish I new where they where. What I gust remembered were they are in the restricted sensation. Come on lets go." "Ok... ok I'm coming gust what up." As the two girls wondered the halls it started to get cold. "Ok let's stop and rest for a wail" "No our friends are out there and it is up to us to save them" "ok you're right as always even though you are younger then me." The two girls kept going until they found the book it was in the darkest part of the library. They read the first few lines of the book and were sent in the same way Lain and
Rin were.




























CHAPTER TWO
THE BRAVE KYRA

Rin found her self in a big palace. There were long lines of solders. "Are
you at war?" asked Rin in a voice that sounded like a child. "Yes we are, but the Legends say that four young girls will come to our town to be priestess two to The south towns two the north the priestess with the true power will lead use all to peace and love." Tom said in serious voice. They went to see emperor Samuel When They got there they meant and talked an staff then they started to eat and Rin
Being a big pig that she is she ate all the food in one bite. Then with out warning Laurie landed on the emperor's head! Laurie and Sam were on the ground out
Cold.

*Way did they do that to me* thought Lain as she was al-alone in the Woods. She was curled up in a little ball next to a tree she was scared and barely dressed. Then she started to cry. "HAAAAAAAA...that was weird." Said Kyra. Then she saw two men walking up. Then she saw Lain. The two men started to Rape again she fought harder then she did before. *I don't want to go though that Trauma again. * She kept on thinking to her self. That's when the men got so aggressive they started to bet her to death. One of the men picked her up and threw her agents a tree. Kyra could fell the anger billed up in her. That's when She stormed out and started to kick ass. She was so pissed she didn't care if she Killed them. "NO ONE and I mean NO ONE tries to kill my friend. Except me of course." She said. Then she punched them both in the nose. Then kicked
Them in there grin. The last thing she did was snap there neck. She ran over to see if Lain was all right. "Are you all right? Wake up pleases Wake up." Said Kyra in a sad almost crying voice. She did the only thing she could think of... She grabbed Lain and ran the same way the men had come from. "Who are you?" asked Sam has he questioned Laurie. "Laurie... Where am I?" she Responded. "Let's take her to see the village Tam home" Said Rin she was so excited. "Sure sounds good to me. Can we go Sir?" asked Tom. "Sounds fine to me." He said "Just be careful."

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After running for about 1/4 of a mile she stopped and rested. She looked
Down to see if Lain was all right... to her amassed to find that she was awake. "Can you walk on your owe?" she asked Lain. "I Don't Know let my try" Said Lain in a week voice. Kyra looked at her hand and saw blood all over them she tried to tell Lain but she tried to stand up then she fell to the ground crying. "What's wrong? Did you heart your self?" She asked. "No I'm fine just the last few days have been hard that's all. I've been rapped four times those men were the one who did it to me. All I remember is calling Rin's name and hoping she
will never happen to her. They would not let me eat or sleep they ether rapped me or beet me. I was so scared." That's when she started to cry even harder. That's when the Kyra heard Rin's voice. "Holed on I'll be right back stay here." She said to Lain. Kyra was running as fast as she could she rounded a bend to see a village. She spotted Rin and Her Sister she ran up to them. "Come with me" She said. So with out question they followed her. She led them to Lain who was now 1/2 way dead. Tamahome picked her up and they all took her to the
palace doctor.


** Help Rin where are you. Leave me alone
RRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN...** Lain awoke in a bed it was the middle of the night. She walked out of the room. Kyra had a funny felling so she walks up she saw Lain wasn't in bed. *Where did she go? * She thought. Then she saw Lain walking out of the room. Kyra ran after her. Just then she and Lain were picked up in two big arms. Kyra fought and got away. Lain didn't try to fight she was to frighten. "Give me my friend back... now or you'll be sorry" she said, "Fine be that way... prepare to get your ass kicked." She jumped after him but he was too high she fell on the emperor's head. He woke up and Kyra was lying
next to him unconscious. *She must dig me* he thought. He started to grab her Ass but she wakes up before he got close enough. Kyra ran out of the room. "What happen?" asked Tamahome "Lain was captured by some weirdo." Kyra said in a pissed off voice. "He looked like you only he had Dark brown hair not black like yours His hair was long and in a pone tail. He also had a long sword." "His name is Taiki. I know him... his is my brother." Said Tamahome. "Well toms don't worry. I'm here and I know gust want you need." Said Rin. Laurie's faces turned from peach to rube red in a hart beet. She was so mad she would have killed her. "His my man not yours." She said. "You wish." Will you two stop fighting? Kyra yelled, embarrassed for them. When the two girls didnt stop fighting over Tamahome; Kyra pulled her little sassier off of Tamahome. Sit here and no fighting. I want you to think of some thing to do about Lains kidnapping. Shortly after Kyra yelled at Laurie she stormed of in rage. Whats her problem? Tamahome asked. Well you see Kyra and Lain have always been together Laurie started to explain, She once told me how they meet How did they meet? Tamahome asked curiously. Kyra says that one day before school she was walking toward school. When she heard yelling come from the near by river thats when she ran to the river to see what was wrong, some thugs picking on Lain. So she went down to beat the crap out of them. When they saw her they ran away, and for some reasons they have been vary close friends ever sense then. Yeah, mean Kyra may look and act though but she is a really softy underneath.


























CHAPTER THREE
THE TWO PRESTRESS


"Well toms don't worry. I'm here and I know gust want you need." Said Rin. Laurie's faces turned from peach to rube red in a hart beet. She was so mad she would have killed her. "His my man not yours." She said. "You wish." Will you two stop fighting? Kyra yelled, embarrassed for them. When the two girls didnt stop fighting over Tamahome; Kyra pulled her little sassier off of Tamahome. Sit here and no fighting. I want you to think of some thing to do about Lains kidnapping. Shortly after Kyra yelled at Laurie she stormed of in rage. Whats her problem? Tamahome asked. Well you see Kyra and Lain have always been together Laurie started to explain, She once told me how they meet How did they meet? Tamahome asked curiously. Kyra says that one day before school she was walking toward school. When she heard yelling come from the near by river thats when she ran to the river to see what was wrong, some thugs picking on Lain. So she went down to beat the crap out of them. When they saw her they ran away, and for some reasons they have been vary close friends ever sense then. Yeah, mean Kyra may look and act though but she is a really softy underneath.
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"PUT ME DOWN RIGHT NOW OR ELSE!!!..."YELLED LAIN
"Or else what?" asks Taiki. "Or else... or else... or else I'll kick you in the balls" "yea right you little prep and fall to your death you bitch." "Well...I'll do any thing But be with you." "Now don't say any thing that you'll regret." "AAAHHH... Taiki gave Lain a strange look and looked in front of him and there was a tree right in front of them! "AAAHHH..." they both screamed at the same time. They kept on screaming because Taiki was flying so low that they were right over the trail. He dropped lain as he did he screamed "you little which." Lain fell to the ground and hit her head and was knocked out. Taiki picked her up and proceed to the castle. When Lain woken up she was dressed in a vary cool looking gown. Taiki was bowing down by her side. She asked him, "Where am I? And how did I get here?" *perfect she dose not remember the incident* thought Taiki. "My lady we are at
the west emperor's tower" he said to Lain. "Ok... do I have to meet him? If so where is he?" "He is in the dining hall." Lain got up and stated to walk to the door and started to fall. "LADY LAIN!" SCREAMED Taiki as he ran to catch her. He caught her and said "Be careful lady Lain you had a vary hard fall and also a hard hit in the head." "How did I fall?" "Some one tried to kidnap you. He dropped you. I wasn't there I time I couldn't catch you. Please for give me lady Lain." "What is the things name that tried to kidnap me?" "His name is Tamahome his my brother" With a satisfied look on her face She walked hand in hand with Taiki to the dining hall, Lain was blushing the whole way. They walked in together and the emperor saw them holding hands and said "Hi you two love birds." That's when Lain realized that they were holding hands and ripped it away. "Taiki was just helping me walk right." She said wail looking at Taiki. "That's right I was helping her walk she did have a pretty hard fall. I have to go thank you." after saying that he bowed and walked off. "Please sit
Down, and eat some thing Lady Lain."
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"I shore hope she is ok." Said Rin "We have to find her our mom will kill us!" "I can see it know." Said Kyra "Oh we are all alright but we lost your daughter Lain in a book" "WILL YOU GUYS SHUT UP!!! I'm trying to think ok, screamed Laurie. "Tamahomea is there a way to get in to the to get in to the other town?" "Well..." said Tom "There are two priestesses per town so we just find out which one it is and send that over there to give us reports of what's going on. Ok?" "All right how do we know how stays her and how is going to go to the other." Asked in a vary nerves Rin. "It's is easy we go to the sacred chest
and get the scroll. The scroll will tell us which one is the one that doesn't
belong." All of them walked to the cemetery and in a big tomb. There inside the tomb was a huge chest. "Ok here I go" Says Tom he jumps in there and you Here a hole bunches of different noises. "Aware... hiss...down girl I mean Boy It is me Tamahomea" "do you think this guy is a nut case?" Kyra asks Rin. "No but I think he is sexy" "Grosses that is nasty Rin. Now I will have a nightmare every night for the rest of my life" said Kyra with shiver. Just the Tom pop out of the chest. "Ok girls the scroll said that the toughies one has to go. This means
Its time to say "good bye" to Kyra. She has to go to the other village right now."

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"My name is Yaten. My lady we are going there some thought times and
the story says that there will be two girls sent to us. One will have a bad mishap when she first arrives from the other world. The other one is taught brave and smart always saving the weaker one. Together they make a mighty team." Said the emperor. "So I'm the priestess for the this town." "Yes you are." "So where is the other one?" "We don't yet My lady. All we know is that you know her. She is strong smart and dose not vary good patients" "Kyra..." "What's that?" "Kyra is all those things that you named off." "Where is she known?" "I think
She is in the other village" * s**t she still remembers some things as lone have we find her friend we'll be ok. Lets just hope that she doesn't spill the beans. * Thought Taiki. *But wait a minuet she likes me (remembering back to when they Were holding hands) She'll believe me no mater that her friend says. * "My lady I think it is time for you to go to bed, said Yaten. "Good Night." Said Lain in a
sleepy voice.

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The next morning Rin and Laurie awoke in the middle of no ware.
"Where are we?" asked Rin. "We are in the mountain in between the two villages, responded Tom. "This is the first spirit is." "First spirit? What are you guys talking a bout?" asked Laurie. "We have to find three of the seven spirits that are here and one of the Spirits are here in this mountain I can censers it... Whoa how did I know all of that?" "Your instances as a preterits are starting to take over." Tom said. "So what dose a priestess does any way?" asked Laurie. "Well they are like princess... but they are higher then and princess in the world. Priestesses have more dangerous jobs then princess they are never in the same place. They take on dangerous missions just to for fill there destiny. Some priestesses are attested and killed before they even start
there missions. Some are even killed before they were born." The girls fear of this job was growing really fast. "So which way to the 1st one?" said Rin in a scared voice. "THIS..." Some men that were coming up the rode cut Laurie senets short. "Quick hide." said Tom. "I cense the spirit near by." Rin whispered. "Me to" whispered Laurie "So how do we know which one am the next spirit Tom?" "Tom...?" "Fooly... Where did he go?" asked Laurie. Her friend didn't answer she just starred out of the bush in which the sat. Laurie looked out there and saw what Rin was looking at. It was Tamahome he was
fighting all of the men. Then a mark began to glow on Tamhomes head
then the last Preston standing fell over. Both girls were just standing there staring at him so life less like. "What is wrong?" he asked them. Then his mark on his for head faded away. "Y...Y...you have a mark on your head." Rin stuttered. "I...I do!?" he said with amassment. "More like you did, it faded away." Laurie said. "So what dose it wean?" Rin asked. "It means that I'm one of the spirits that you are looking for." "Which way to the next one?" "Which ever one you are drawn to." "OK LETS GO THIS WAY." Rin said pointing
Toured the sunset.
"My Lady it is time to wake up." Taiki said. * Way won't she wake up? Should I... maybe I should try? * Thought Taiki. * I'll try it. * He bent down to kiss her but she shot striate up and hit him on the head. "OUCH... that was painful. My god she has a hard head. Son of a bitch." "Oh my goddess I'm so
sorry." Lain said, "its ok I'm ok." "Are you sure?" "Yes I'm sure. Now get dressed and fallow me. There is some one I wont you to meat." * I wonder who he wants me to meat.* she thought. "Maybe his girlfriend she said to her self in a disappointed voice. After she got dressed she when down to the dining room. "Ha. ha.. ha... ha.... ha..... ha...... ha....... They got you to ware a dress a pink one for that mater." "If you tell this to any one, I mean any one I will kill you and stop
laughing at me." Yelled Kyra. "I'm sorry you look so funny." Lain said wail still laughing. You little... Im going to kill you if you dont stop laughing. How did they do it? Do what? How did they get you to ware a dress? Well I awoke this morning the dress was the on the bed and there was no pants in the dresser. That is way it is called a dresser silly. Lady Kyra Lady Lain please calmed down. Taiki said. The emperor is still a sleep. So what are we doing today? Yea! What are we doing? Killing people, Hitting people or even being mean to people? Today we are going to find the first of 3 sprites. Wait a minute did you say 3 sprites. Yes way do you ask? Isnt there 7 in all and the other village as to find 3 to so ware is the last one? We do not know all we know is that one of the 4 priestess is the last one. But we dont know which one of you it is. So how do we find of which one of us is the spirits? The one that is the bravest is the spirits. * It must be me. * thought Kyra. Come on it is time to go. Excuse me but can we change first? Kyra asked. Serenely here ware these. Pants ware did you get them? I had them the whole time. Way you * Note to self when discovered as the last spirit. Come back as a ghost and kill him. * Give those to me. Kyra snatched the pants away and sled them on as quickly as she could. Here put this on Lady Lain. After he said that she was so embarrassed she could have died. Thank you. Do you have any shirts for us to ware? Way ahead of you girl. Kyra yelled from a crossed the room. She digging thou her dresser. Here ware this it might fit you. She was holding up a gray tie-shirt. What one are you going to ware? asked Lain. Im going to ware this one! She said wail holding up a tie-shirt that said If you dont like the way I look say it to my face. on the back of it. Ok nice. Taiki can you please live so we can change closes. Yes at once my Lady. Then he left. Lain whats with that guy. He kidnapped you and you for gave him for doing that? He didnt kidnap me I came here with Rin and Tamahome kidnapped me and Rin I got a way and fell to ground and hit my head. No thats not what happen dont you remember any thing? Do you remember me saving your life? Those horrible things that those men did to you do you remember any of it? Do you? No I dont remember any of it. Nothing All I remember is me and Rin going in to the book then I was looking for Rin. Then you and Laurie a doctor. Then I awoke up here. Come on Lain do you remember any thing else? Nope nothing else, But I feel as if there is some thing that I dont wont to remember. * I Know what she dose not wont she doesnt wont to remember. * Should I tell her? * She asked her self. * No I cant tell her. I dont wont her to know she will actually remember. * Girls Its time to go. Taiki yelled from the other side of the door. Ok were are coming. Kyra yelled to him.


















CAPTER FOUR
IN THE FAMES

Mean wail back in the real world the libation was walking up and down the hall taking a look at the books on the shelfs and putting books back ware they belong for the next day. She found the book that The fore girls had read out of and Saw the page turn by its self. She called her friend and said to her It has happen agene. Yui it has been a long time. The libation Said to her friend Yui. It is so nice to see you to Miaka. So has it really begun agene? Yui asked Miaka. Yes but there are four instead of just two. So it is going to be fun meeting every body agene yes but we cant go unless we go in our uniforms. It as been about Twenty-five years in there time cents we have been there right but here it has only been a couple of days. Wait if we go who will get us out? Kenshin! they both said at the same time. So they called Kenshin. He came to the library and they told him the story about the fore girls in the book. How do you know if I will believe you? Kenshin asked the girls. Well you believed me when I told you a bout it when was there mouth a go. Miaka said. Ok now let rewrite a part of the story after they both find one spirit. Yui said.
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Come on girls. This way to the hut of Megumi. Kaiki yelled. So who is this Megumi any way? Kyra asked. She is the great wise and powerful elder. So why are we going to see her? She will help us find the first spirit. What are you guys talking about? Lain asked. If you would have cot up with us a little wail a go you would have known. Oh no What? I made her cry. Is that a good thing? Only if you wont to be deaf yes. Stop and plug your ears. Waaaaaaaaaaaaa Lain was screaming wail crying. How do you shut her up? One you can wait it out or just say sorry. Say youre sorry. No and rune my reputation. Kyra said wail walking away. Then all of s sodden it is quite. What for me. Lain yelled. Oh by the way just walking a way works to. Kyra said to Taiki. Here we are. He walked up to door and knocked on it. A young red headed little girl answered the door. Yes? she said is a small voice. Miss. Nami is your mother home? Come in Taiki. Who are these strangers? She said in a small cute voice. They are the priestesses of this town. Miss. Megumi I am gladded to see that you are well. Miss. Megumi ware sale we go to find the first spirit? You will first rest for a wail I will tell you in the morning. They all had dinner and went to bed. Miss. Megumi cans you I mean can you Kyra tried to say the words but they just couldnt come out. Kyra my little one you wont me to give back your friends memories backs. Yes Is that what you truly wont? Yes it is. Yes I see. I will do it if you do some thing for me. What do you wont me to do? Here take this and write every thing that you heir and do in this book. I will thank you Miss. Megumi. Later on that night Miss. Megumi woke up Lain. Lain I have some thing to show you. Lain got up and fowled and they all ended up at a vary big merrier. Mirror shows this girl what she has lost. The mirror twinkled then began to show lain the insaneness that happened. When it was all over Lain had a cross between a shocked and a merited face. Lain walked back to bed with the same look on her face and said nothing. The next morning Kyra or Lain was no ware to be found. After looking for what seemed like hours they found Kyra trying to snap Lain out of it. What did you do to her? Kyra screamed to Miss. Megumi. I did exactly what you asked me to do. Then silence came option the room the only thing you could here was Lains soft crying. Im ok serially I am. Lain said in a soft voice. Ok but if you need any thing just tell me. Just then a team of thieves came in and attacked. * Whats that I am felling. * Kyra thought. She looked at the ringleader and saw that he had a fan that shot out fire. Taiki keep an eye on Lain I have to see some thing. Kyra made it her duty to find out if that funny felling was true. Look what we have here. The ringleader said. A little girl wants to fight. Fine if Im a little girl then your about to get you but kicked by one. Thats makes it even better. Take this. And he thou some fire at her. She took a directed hit. My Lady is you alright? Yea Im fine. She thou a couple punched at him. You know it would be easer to fight you if I none your name. My name is Tasuki. He says wail-attacking Kyra with the fan then he folds it up and hits the back of Kyras neck and Knocks her out. My Lady Kyra I will help you. Taiki yelled from accursed the room. Then all of a sudden a big blast of light came from the center of the room. Kyra woke up in the middle of the room every one was gone. But Taiki, Miss. Megumi, Yoh, Nami, and Lain. Lain was a sleep with her head on Tasuki. Kyra I know who the first spirit is. Lain said in a sleepy voice. Who is it? Tasuki is the spirit I saw the mark glowing on his arm wail you guys were fighting. What how do you know all that stuff did Miss. Megumi tell you? No I just know. After every one woke up they all left Nami and Miss. Megumi.

Ok lets do a little rewriting. Yui said. No wait I want to see some thing. Miaka said. Miaka looked at the cover of the book just as I thought. Chiriko had to do the same thing as Kyra had to do. What are you guys talking about? Kenshin asked. Dont you remember Chiriko? Miss. Megumi asked her to do the same thing that she asked Kyra to do. So what you are saying is that this Chiriko resaved a journal and wrote the book that we are reading right now? No Kenshin Chirikos book never made it over here it disappeared when I tried to take it to this world. So who wrote this book? Kyra did see. Miaka said wail holding up the book to show him. Ok so now can I do a little rewriting? Yui asked. Yes know you can just rewrite it in panicle. Ok she said in a disappointed voice. Im done so I will replace Kyra and you can replace Rin. Ok lets go. They both read the first two lines.

BANG! There was a loud notice followed by a big flash of light. When it was over Lain, Yoh, Taiki, Tasuki, Tamahomea, Miaka, Yui and Laurie were all together in a big clearing in the middle of the woods. *What was that? * every one thought. who are you? Lain screamed at Yui. Who are you? Laurie asked Miaka in a polite voice. Lain Laurie We is the priestess that the legends tolled about. How did you know our names? Also you cant be in the legends you guys are only 15 how can that be? Laurie you are smart you should know how to figure this out. Miaka said to Laurie wail looking starring at Lain. Give me a little wail on this. Yui Lain she looks just like you. Miaka whispered to Yui. Laurie you know who she reminds me of she reminds me of Niang-ning Bright smart with a sense of humor. I Know it is kind of scary. Finally Tasuki wakes up. He sees Yui and Miaka standing next to each other. YUIMIAKA is that you. He yells at the top of his lunges. Hi Tasuki how are you last time I saw you was 25 years ago. I cant believe my eyes I real is you. So how old will you be now? Yui asked. 165 years to be exacted. Lain walks up to Tasuki with a blank stare. You are how old? Lain asked. 165 I was 140 when I meet them. He said wail pointing at Miaka and Yui. Ive got it. The time here moves faster then It dose in Our world. Laurie said.
Where am I This place looks so familiar. Kyra said wail looking around. Kyra over here. Said a voice. Kyra looks toured were the voice came from. Boo! Rin yelled. Kyra jumped and looked over at her friend. Kyra was so pissed at her friend she could of killed her for scaring her. Kyra I wont you to meet Kenshin What book is he reading? she asked Rin. I do not know. Hay Kenshin what are you reading? A book that you wrote. What? You two go home pre pare to go at any time. Go were? You know. The place that you came from the book. Not even bothering to say any thing Kyra and Rin ran out of the library. Oh Jo Ive missed you so much wail I was I was gone. Kyra yelled wail greeting one of her friends. Kyra what are to talking a bout I just saw an hour a go. Oh sorry it seemed longer then that. She said quickly and ran off. Rin We were there for a week but here it as only been a couple of hours. We better tell my mom that we are going to be gone for a wail. Rin said. Yea that might be a good idea and I will handle my mom. We will also bring some close to ware for us and our sisters. Dont forget some food. Ok lets go we will meet at the Library in 15 minutes. So that two girls went off and found the stuff that they needed.
Mean wail back in the other world
Lain I think you and Yui should spend more time together. Miaka said in a sweet voice, Did you know that you and Yui went through the same thing when she first arrived here? Let her talk to you about it. After that Lain and Yui went a little a way from camp. Maiki walked up to Laurie and began to talk and compare experiences. So did you really Know Tasuki 25 years ago? Yes I did he was one of the spirits when I was a priestess. So Yui what did she means a bout the same thing? I was raped to when I came here. I was found a week later a dined by the place doors. Me to but I was found four days later by Kyra one of my friends but thats all I remember. Oh I just remembered who was the spirit priestess? She was me
Were back Kinshen... Rin Yelled thou the closed Library doors. Come in girls. He said as he opened the doors. You guys came just in time. Why what happen? Kyra asked. Yui the girl that is replacing you as reveled a secret that you are not spots to know. Read the lines. This is how the spell went Send us back to for which we came. Find the spirits to guide us to the right path of love, bravery and trust. Send us to Lain and Laurie replace the two that do not belong. A big lash of light a peered and Rin and Kyra were transported to the other world wail Yui and Miaka were sent home. Good Bye Kinshen. They yelled as the left home. She didnt know if she was going to see home again but she new she had her friends with her.
Meanwhile bake in the book Yui and Miaka began to disappear. Well thats all the time we can have with you got to go. Your friends will be coming bake soon Miaka said wail she looked at her hand as it was diapering. Lain take head to what I said, and look for the spires by your self. If dont youll more then likely cause pain for your self and those around you. Yui said as she disappeared and Krya appeared in her place. Lain could here excitement as Rin appeared.














CHAPTER FIVE
IN SLAVES AT THE TIME OF LEAVE

That night Tasuki explained to the what there are going to do. ok thats about it. Any questions? Tasuki said. Yes I have one Is it true that Yui was one of the spirit last time? Lain asked. Ok any one else. Tasuki said quickly. Tasuki why are you avoiding the question? Lain asked. OHNO Every one said together except for Tasuki and Tamahomea. Tamahomea get back here with me. Rin said. No with me Laurie yelled and grabbed his other arm. TASUKI WHY ARE YOU AVODING THE QUESTION!? Lain said angrily. I dont care who he is with just as long as we get out of here! Kyra yelled at her little sister and one of her friends, Oh My god Tasuki tell her before she kills us all!!! Ok Ok Ill tell you... Ill tell you just be quiet! Tasuki yelled at Lain. Almost as fast a he said that Lain was silent. Every body relaxed and lessened to Tasukis story from what happened to Yui and her Friend ship with Miaka. And thats how it happened Tasuki said finely finishing his story. So were are going to be agents each other? Rin asked covetously. Yes we are butt you say that you guys didnt find this out until, Yui called the god. Kyra asked. After Kyra asked that Lain got up quickly hugged everyone good night and went to bed. What wrong with her? Laurie asked every one. Every one gust shrugged there head and forgot about it. Shortly after word every one went to bed. Come on Krya its time for bed Rin told her as she went to bed. Its ok Im going to stay up for a little wail longer... Kyra told Rin. Ok what ever you say. Be sure to get some sleep Rin said in a tired voice, Good night Rin yawned and fell a sleep. A little after Lain woke up She thought every one was asleep. Kyra was in the bushes peering at Lain. *I wonder what she is up to so late at night* Kyra said to her self. Then all of a sudden Kyra looked up and saw Lain starting to run a way. Kyra jumped out of the bushes and ran after lain, Kyra caught up with her and grabbed her arm. Whats wrong with you why did you run off like that? Do you want men to take you again like they did last time? Kyra yelled at Lain, Why wont you answer my question? After not being answered a second time Kyra grabbed Lains chin and mad her look at her. Tell me why you are running away! Tell me Krya said in a fierce voice. Yuishe she tolled me to leave and and never come back because, all of you guys would be in pain. Lain said still no willing to look in Kyras eyes. Ok I dont care what she said that is still no reason to run away Kyra was now a little bit cooled down now that she had Lain talking again. Im sorry Krya, but I dont want any one to get hurt because of me Lain looked up and Kyra let go of Lains face. Lain sweated away Kryas hand. As Lain ran away Krya stood there smiling. LAIN WHAT UP Kyra yelled as she ran after Lain. What do you want now? Lain asked angrily. Lain What are you doing? Why are you going on an adventure with out me? Kyra said in a cheerful voice. Lain looking at her lovingly Thanks Kyra Lain said as they walked off over and out of sight. Do you think its a good Idea to let them leave like that? Tom asked Tasuki, Well if you ask me I think there going to be ok I mean after all that girl is one of us not to mention they are two pretty tough girls. You know what your actual making sense scary and I can under stand it ok Tasuki now your really scaring me.
What Lain and Kyra are gone? yelled Rin at the top of her lungs. It seems to be true that Lain and Kyra are gone from this group. Laurie said in a reasoning voice. Well there is nothing we can do about it now. Said Tasuki. After that was said they started to clean up the campsite. Just then a group of solders came and took every one hostage. I knew they would leave so I called the solders around to captured the enemy. Said Taiki, Send every one to the sellers but keep the fanged kid in the in the dungeon. Tomahoma started to fight the solders but it was then that Taiki yelled, Get away to the solders. Then a really strong chi surrounded them and a bolt of pour chi struck Tomahoma and Tasuki knocking them out. TAMAHOMA!!!!!! screamed Laurie and Rin at the same time. Then they two were knocked out. When Rin woke up she found her self in a damp place with Laurie and Tamahoma. Has she got more a wake she realized that they were moving in a room with bares. Thats when she started to wake up Laurie and Tomahoma. As soon as Tomahoma and Laurie realized that they were in a cage moving. The door to the cage opened, they saw a man a then the man grabbed Rin handed her some close. Thats when some women took her to a room. When Rin re a pered she was wearing a red Kimono with triangles on it. The man took out some chains and put them around Rims neck Laurie was the next one to be pulled out of the cage. Tamahoma now? she yelled as soon as she was out of the cage. Tamahomea steeped out of the cage slowly and asked than man What is your name? the two girls just looked at Tamahomea kina dazed and confused. The man responded, My name is Sesshoumarou. Ok then Sesshoumarou... will please let my friends go. When there was no response to Tamahomes demand, an all out war brook out. Tamahome was able to lie a few punches on him before they paused for a minuet or two to see what damage that they have done. Sesshoumarou smiled and chuckled a little. Thats when Tamahomes ponytail fell to the ground it was a clean cut off. Even Tamahome was surprised. Dame I didnt even see him do that. Thats when one of Sesshoumarous assenters came up and KISSED Tamahome, passing something down Tamahomes throat. Thats when she begins laughed and Tamahomes chi was drained. Nice work Mickey, now finish getting every one ready.





























CHAPTER SIX
THE SLAVE TRADE


Sesshoumarou came back an hour latter. Ok now Im going to give every one a new name and you must act as if was the name your mother gave you. He walked up to Tamahome first Tamahome was it your new name is Kei-Kun. Yes sir. Said Tamahome. Oka little excited are we. Any way Laurie is I would like to give you a First and last NAME your foul name is Kanako Urashima Ok... sir thank you sir. Laurie said, * Oh god Im named after the Gothic girl from Love Hina * Next is you Rin Your new name is Rinatin. I will not be selling you all right I will see if I want to sell you or not so I sagest that you all be good for me, Shortly after saying that Sesshoumarou left the room. What kind of name is Kei-Kun? Tamahome asked every one once Sesshoumarou left.
***Attention: After a few sentences the charters will be using the names that Sesshoumarou gave them.***
You think you have it bad I have to change my First and last name; to the name Kanako Urashima non the less. Laurie complained. Come on guys its not that bad. I mean the name Kei-kun was the name of a great honor from me and every one elses own time. Think about it Laurie if your Kanako you can be a master of discus. Rin said trying to convince them. Well Rin you got the only good name there was; also Lauries sentence was cut off. Excuse me but you three should start to get use to your new name. Said a small quiet voice. The three turned around to see the girl from before, Sesshoumarous assenting Mickey! What do you mean get use to them? Kanako asked irritated. Well you see once Lord Sesshoumarou makes up his mind there is almost no turning back. She responded. Before Kanako could respond to that answer Kei-Kun cut in, Ok, one question Mickey what is up with that kiss? I mean you cant go around kissing people out of the blue like that! he asked infuriated. Im sorry Kei-Onichan; Bout you see that kiss was the only way to pass the medicine to you. What exactly dose that medicine do? Rinatin asked Mickey, Im sorry but that Medicine is to eliminate one pensions chi. Before any one could do any thing Sesshoumarou grabbed Mickeys hair, and he yelled, Kanalla gthsana allagana forgeka now agota sheamaknya. And the two argued as Sesshoumarou dragged Mickey away by her hair. OK That was weird what kind of language was that? Kanako asked every one. I have know idea. Said Kei-kun. Maybe we shouldnt have started to talk to Mickey. Suggested Kanako. Now mater what I will find out weather or not she has information on this Sesshoumarou or not. Im also going to become her friend. Rinatin said confidently. T
The morning came and the next thing any one knew was that they were being tested weather or not to sell them as slaves. A bout a week later Rinatin walk up to find her self still in bed and that know was there. She heard cheering and some crying of women and children. She got up and started toward the sound. She ran in to bars and peered out at an slave auction and she was horrified to see Kanako (Laurie) and Kei-Kun (Tamahome) were being soled. Mickey brought up Kanako in changes and forced her to stand still as Sesshoumarou was showing her off This young lady is at the age of 14years and is virgin. So that means that she has never been touched. As you can see she has some pretty good knockers on her and she is a vary good hose keeper and her cooking is harried looking; but taste like heaven. She is also vary frisky. So in my apportion I think that she will be a vary good wife. LET THE BIDING BEGEN!! There was a big Brest of voices yelling out numbers. Then there was a big silence as one man bided 55 gold nuggets. Every one gasped and thats when the man looked over at Rinatin and there eyes meet. There was a chill that ran down Rinatins spine once there eyes meet. There was a big bang as the hammer hell meeting the prenatal; thats when Sesshoumarou yelled, Soled to the man with 55 gold nuggets. The walked up to the stage and played for Kanako as he reach for the changes. He almost had the chains but Mickey pulled her hand away. Sesshoumarou seeing what happened started to yell at Mickey, Shanatlllye kana gole Nyamo! Mickey started to tear and she gave the chains to the man that won Kanako. Rinatin watched horrified; as Kanako left forcefully by the man. Rinatin not even thinking she cried out, LAURIE!!!!!!!! and Rinatin fell to the ground sobbing. Sesshoumarou voice was heard again, Next up on the line is Kei-Kun. He is a very muscular young man and he is good at every thing he doses. Ladies I think he would make vary good husband. LET THE BIDING BEGEAIN!! This there was only two voice biding. One was an old woman and the other was a young girl no more then 16years old. It looked like that they would die if ether of them didnt get him as the love slave. The biding went from 1 silver coin to 2 gold nuggets; the old woman gave in once the girl bided 4 gold nuggets and 75 silver coins. The 16 year old was the winner, She walked up to the stage and padded Sesshoumarou the money. The time the why that Mickey looked was different. She looked as if she trusted this girl. Mickey gave the chains to the girl with no hesitation. Thats when the girl took Kei-Kun away leaving poor Rinatin all alone not knowing if the would see each other again. (sob)
A little later every one cleared out and the big doors closed. Thats when Mickey came in to the room. Mickey came in to the same room as Rinatin; she saw her on the ground crying. Im sorry I wasnt able to save your two friends. Mickey said looking a way not wanting Rinatin to see her face. Tell me why did you give that man the chains to Kanako? Rinatin asked looking up from her tears. I had to If I didnt do it. Mickeys voice goes down to a mutter, as she talked. Rinatin looked at Mickey, What? Tell me the reaction why Rinatin was enraged; she stood up to her and screamed, Why? When the only thing Mickey did was just stand there; Rinatin picked up the girl by the color of her shirt. Rinatin kept screaming Why? Thats when out of the blue Mickey Screamed, Shamatake banacoue shenaded comed asoakiky. Rinatin groped Mickey to the ground realizing that she wasnt going to get a good answer from her. Thats when Mickey said, Rinatin were are order to come to the dinner table. When there were at the dinner table Sesshoumarou was waiting for them to come, Welcome my two slaves Rinatin I sold your friends because your friends are unworthy of being my slaves Now there something that Mickey will teach you witch we speak. When I say speak I mean the langue that Mickey and me speak. You should feel one red about this none of the other slaves get to learned this so be off with you. And with that Mickey and Rinatin were off.
Kei-kun was struggling trying to get free. Thats when the young girl turned around and said to him, My name is Mutsumi, Kei-kun I know that Kei-kun is not your real name now come on and tell me your real name. Thats when Kei-kun spoke up and said my name is, Tamahome. Oh good that means your one of the spirits that I know of How did you know that I that I am a spirit? Tamahome asked confused but kind of relived. Well every one knows about the spirits, of the haven and earth. Oh yea! said Tamahomea embarrassed. Well I can tell you one thing, and that is the only way to brake the curse that was sent upon you. You have to be kissed by the one that gave the curse to you. Mutsumi said. That girl whats her name? he said thinking. Was her name Mickey? Mutsumi asked. Yeah, now that I think a bout it her name is Mickey, her and that slave trader Sesshoumarou, talked to each other in a different language. He said remembering the harsh tons that Sesshoumarou often used wail speaking that language. Well thats not important now as long as we know it her we should be a-ok; by the way I dont like to be called Mutsumi so call me Mu-chan.










CHAPTER SEVEN
THE YEAR THEY WERE APART

Were here at last! Mu-chan adduced at a big door. She pushed the door open and Tamahome peered in to see lots of busy people. Some arranging flowers others cleaning floors, and some were ever dressed up in the best Kimonos! Whats going on here? Tamahome asked. Today our Master is getting married. Answered, Mu-chan. Wow, so whos the lucky girl? I dont know for I maybe a high servant here but I still do not know who she is, all I know is that she requested that quit a few people were inviter to the wedding and, and one of them was you. Shortly after Mu-chan said that, a young girl about seventeen ran out of a room in the house. She was the bride she was dressed in the bride Kimono and when she looked over at Tamahome and smiled. Tamahome still by the door couldnt tell who it was, thats when the girl ran you and hugged Tamahome. Wow I cant believe you made it! she said excitedly. Tamahome pulled out of the girls grip and mage to say something, Urm excuse me miss; but just who are you? Tamahome you dont remember me I saps not. She sighed, Tamahome its me Kyra! After hearing that he was so shocked that he fainted. How is he? Tamahome heard a voice say, Ok, thats great to know doctor. Shortly after he heard a door open and close behind him, Tamahome opened his eyes to see Kyra leaning over him wail put a wet cloth on his forehead. Hi, Kyra shortly after he said that he jolted up surprise to see Kyra, this time not in the bride Kimono. Tell me Tamahome wares my little sister? Kyra asked with a little bit of concern in her voice. Tamahome hasted to tell her what had happen to her little sister Laurie. She was he hasted, S-she was sold as a slave under the name of he paused thinking, The name of Kanako Kanako Urashima.
For gust a second Kyra looked as if she was going to cry. How could you let her be sold as a slave she punched him before he could explain to her about being powerless. My lady stop he is powerless, Mu-chan, screamed, he lost he spirit power about a year a go wail he was a slave! I dont real care. Her eyes were now glowing, with color of fire red. Com your self... Kyra, a man walked n the room as Tamahome walked back up to the house. Instantly Karas eyes stopped glowing and she was calmed. Hello there, the man said when he noticed Tamahome. Now Kyra spoke, Tamahome, this is my dear soon to be husband, Jadeite. The expiration on Tamahomes face was priceless, his chin was so fare down that if he wanted, it could have touched the ground. Big sister you said you had surprise for me screamed a younger child as she ran in to the room, big sister the child then notice Tamahome standing in the middle garden out side. TAMAHOME!!!! the child screamed as she jumped on him. Um who are you? Tamahome asked, Its me silly. She said as she looked up at Tamahome. Um Its me Lain! WHAT?!?!?!?! Tamahome screamed, shortly after the all whet in side to tell Tamahome, about what happened over the year that they had been apart
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Shortly after we departed we found our selves wit no food, water or any idea on ware we were going. Then Lain since a spirit near by. Kyra started to explain. Now Tamahome was taking the time to examine the child (Lain) over. So we went to see if she was right Thats when we saw Jadeite. She said as she looked over at him, we told him who we were and how we didnt have a place to stay. Shortly after when Jadeite was gone some people came to steel some stuff. Thats Lain interrupted, Then she Kicked all there butts, and then Jadeite took her in as his impotents after he saw how much damage she did. Then her and Big brother fell in love with each other, but they couldnt get married, so we went to find this witch. Thats when Mu-chan put her hand over the mouth of the goddess of run on sentences (the child [Lain]) in order to let Kyra continue her story. Well that is true Lain, we did fall in love but I was to younger t get married. As Lain said, we went to see this witch that could have made me a bit older. But you see the witch need an impure maiden as a sacrifice the maiden had to be older then twelve. So Lain volunteered to be the sciatica. Apparently the reason the sciatica had to de older then twelve, was so that the witch could ten years of the sciaticas life away, so I could become older. Yea, Lain aid finely breaking free from Mu-chans grip, Thats why Im so small, but I like being small. By the way Tamahome wares Rin? Um she is now one of the slaves of Sesshomaru. He said nervously. WHAT?! That cant be how could that happen, I- Lain was cut off by Mu-chan, Sesshomaru is not that bad, all he is trying to do is supported his sister, Mu-chan mumbled wile, blushing. What? every one asked at once, Ok, when Sesshomaru and Mickey were just young theyre parents were killed in a horrible fire. The two children alone and scared stared to wonder around. Thats when slave traders captured them. The head slave trader took a liking Sesshomaru, but he wanted to sell Mickey. Sesshomaru wouldnt let them, so he ran up on the stage in the middle of the election to stop him. Latter that night Sesshomaru was wiped, thats when he promised him self that he would never let any one try or hurt Mickey. Now he sells slaves in order to support himself and Mickey. Thats also way he has never owned a slave. What do you mean never owned a slave? He now owns Rin! asked Tamahome irritated, He owns her because he is interested in her. In other words he might be in love with her. And how exactly do you know this? Lain asked. Well you see Sesshomaru, Mickey and me were friends and still are to this day. Everyone looked touched by her story. What s sad story (sniff put tissue to cheek) I shore hope that me and big brother and big sister will be that close some day. Said, Lain in a sad voice.



I hoped you liked it Its not done yet. Rolling eyes

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