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PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 1:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This fanfic is somethign i started befor eand never finished. Its about the hogwarts gang going off to a summercamp at hogwarts. They encounter new romances, freindship conflicts and even a suicide note?! O_o!!!!! Read to find out! Ill post the first chapter when i get some readers... anyoen anyone at al??
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PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 1:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

aw well heres first chapter... the second and first chapter kinda suck.. . . . . but i wrote them a long tinme ago so dont get mad at me!


Harry Potter and the Summer of Dreams
A fanfic by Dr Ice Cube
Chapter one
Harry was sitting on his bedside window, looking out at the sunset. The Dursleys were out on a trip to an amusement park for Dudleys birthday. Yet again Harry was left alone. He looked one more time at the beautiful colors, and then went to sleep. Then all the sudden, he awoke with a scare. Whats that noise? The Dursleys cant be back yet. Harry whispered as he creeped over to the door. He looked into the hallway and saw none other than Ron and Hermione them selves!! What are--- Harry started to whisper but Hermione interrupted. We cant talk here. Oh, but where are we going? We are going to Yes?? Were going to Sirius old house Ron said without saying a breath. Oh. Harry walked back into his room.
Did you bother to house? Harry mumbled kind of an angry tone to his voice. What did you say Harry? Hermione asked. DID YOU BOTHER TO ASK HIM IF WE COULD STILL USE HIS HOUSE BEFORE HEHE Harry looked at the shocked faces on his friends, the sad look in there eyes that he had had all summer, weeping for the good friend theyve lost. Im... sorry, lets just leave before the Dursleys get back. Harry said as he grabbed all his junk and stuffed it in to his trunk. He grabbed Hedwig and went down to the kitchen. Wait, Ron, Hermione, how are we getting to, you know where? Harry asked. Portkey. They both said at once. Great. Harry said. He didnt fancy portkeys very much. He didnt like the spinning, the twirling and usually the puking.
As they grabbed the old worn pair of shoes (their Portkey for today) and spinned off to Number Twelve Grimmhauld Palace Harry thought, its all their fault Sirius is dead. They slowed me down. No they didnt. A small innocent voice said in his head. The same old annoying small innocent voice, he hated that voice. It isnt anyones fault. People die. Its a natural thing. Forget about it. Dont forget about Sirius, just forget about his death. When Harry looked up from his thoughts, they were already knocking on the door of the house of Harrys godfather. Mrs. Weasley answered the door. Hello Harry dear! Come in come in. Mrs. Weasley rushed them into the house. Oh my Harry, look how skinny you are, come on lets go put some meat on those bones, its time for dinner. Oh, look at your hair; youll need a hair cut later! Mrs. Weasley said. It will just grow back mum Yes, it always does. Too voices from the end of the hall said. Fred , George, come down here and greet Harry properly. Mrs. Weasley said to the two figures who now resembled Fred and George Weasley. Hello Harry dear. Its just smashing to see you dear! Harry laughed for the first time all Summer. Maybe this Summer isnt going to be as bad as I thought. Harry said.


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PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's not how you post a fanfiction for feedback and responses. <_<
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