Whats It About?

Lumin · Rookie Joined: 15 Feb 2005 Posts: 37

Whats it about? Is it about time? Is it about me? Is it about the two line mix from the tree? We're slowing but we never seem to stop. We're running but we never seem to get any further then the start. Images of me and you and you and he. Who could we all be? Now they say that everything has a meaning and a place. Its where we're all suposed to be. Except for the place we wherent ment to see. And they say that the best view of God is from Hell. And how lucky can you get we're all going there anyhow. At least they'll get to see. See all of their sins. Have it shoved in front of them as they feel the fire hot pens. 'cause Hell isnt what you want it to be. Its ten time worse or one thousand if your me. For no matter where i go. It doesnt matter when i die. I'll be in Hell. Heaven or Below.
By: Jake G. Lumin when half asleep . . . .

jhonenfreak · Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 4:37 pm Post subject:

I belive this belongs in Self Promotion. You can either post your poetry here for comments, or you can enter the poetry contest in the contest section. Please do not create a new general section thread for one poem.
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