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Black-Bird Has No Life
Joined: 26 Dec 2004 Posts: 442 Location: Neverland
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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AWSOME!
The lines are nice and Firm. With Great definition.
But the waist is a little short. so... 4/5
*click* _________________ [img]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b293/burning4learning/wadessig.jpg[/img] |
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Nooru Very bored
Joined: 25 Apr 2005 Posts: 152
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Kya!!!
another awesome work from you!!!
all the details on the dress and the straberries!!! The shade, the hair: gorgeous!
9/10!
well
please rate this one
lol, I know I might alrady post this pic in this topic but I'm out of drawings |
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Black-Bird Has No Life
Joined: 26 Dec 2004 Posts: 442 Location: Neverland
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:30 pm Post subject: |
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BEAUTIFUL 10/10
No complaints here.
anyhow. It's sketchy because that's the way I draw. Sketch it out like in all those boring tutorials. I guess I Forgot to erase ALL of the linework. DAMN anyhow. Noy that you mention it I think I'll CONCIDER coloring it.
"Click on me" _________________ [img]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b293/burning4learning/wadessig.jpg[/img] |
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DG-sama Moderator
Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2294
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:01 pm Post subject: |
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I think you forgot the link there.. >.> _________________ [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v142/DG-sama/avatars/kingsig.jpg[/img]
God damn you signature WORK! |
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Nooru Very bored
Joined: 25 Apr 2005 Posts: 152
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:37 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="DG-sama (DG-sama)"] I think you forgot the link there.. >.> [/quote]
nope he didn't
just click on the smilie!
I dojn't know how he did that though |
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jhonenfreak Elder In Training
Joined: 28 Jan 2004 Posts: 3306 Location: Tallahassee
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:13 pm Post subject: |
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He just put the ; ) between the [URL=http:// ] [/URL ]
I'd give yours a 3/5 for creativity, but it seems to lack real definition and dimention. Maybe if you were to darken areas and add brighter highlights with a white pencil it might stand out more, but is really do like the concept behind the entire image!
New picture... uploaded like half an hour ago---> clicky _________________ [url=http://starrust.com][img]http://starrust.com/images/linksout/starrust2.gif[/img][/url] |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13710 Location: Moo
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:58 am Post subject: |
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The broken images lately are due to multi-server integration (FAC is growing too big for just one these days).
Jhonenfreak's pic:
[u]http://www.fanart-central.net/graphics/j/jhonenfreak/226394.jpg[/u] _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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jhonenfreak Elder In Training
Joined: 28 Jan 2004 Posts: 3306 Location: Tallahassee
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 10:40 am Post subject: |
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It's broken?!? :huh: Weird. I can open it. Let's go with what Strata said. _________________ [url=http://starrust.com][img]http://starrust.com/images/linksout/starrust2.gif[/img][/url] |
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Black-Bird Has No Life
Joined: 26 Dec 2004 Posts: 442 Location: Neverland
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 7:19 am Post subject: |
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Anyways.
here _________________ [img]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b293/burning4learning/wadessig.jpg[/img] |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13710 Location: Moo
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 10:18 am Post subject: |
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Jhonenfreak's picture never received its critique, did it?
So allow me.
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-226394.html[list][i]Strong Points:[/i]
- Very nice, graphic-design style. Simple shapes and a limited color palette are the same tricks used to produce real poster ads.
[i]Weak Points:[/i]
- I hate shrimp :P
[i]Overall:[/i]
Really, I can find no faults with it. 5 of 5.[/list:u]
Now, for yours, Blackbird:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=192029[list][i]Strong Points:[/i]
- Simple, semi-anime style is very easy to read and interpret.
- Perfect shading/detail for the hair.
- Good detail on the flower petals.
[i]Weak Points:[/i]
- Could benefit from some more contrast.
- Hair strikes me as being a little "gelled" -- the hair hanging down in front of her shoulders, for example, should pretty much hang DOWN, and not at an angle.
- Where's the neck?
[i]Overall:[/i]
- Nice, on the low end of 4/5 territory.[/list:u]Now, for something a little different. Critique this...
(#2) - pic-227860.html
[b][i]compared to[/i][/b] this:
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jhonenfreak Elder In Training
Joined: 28 Jan 2004 Posts: 3306 Location: Tallahassee
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 1:38 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the detailed critique, Strata! ^_^ I had assumed that everyone just forgot my drawing. _________________ [url=http://starrust.com][img]http://starrust.com/images/linksout/starrust2.gif[/img][/url] |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13710 Location: Moo
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 1:47 pm Post subject: |
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Now let's hope they don't forget about me. :)
[quote]Critique this...
(#2) - pic-227860.html
[b]compared to[/b] this:
(#1) - pic-219375.html[/quote]
That's right, do a compare/contrast type of critique. _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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DG-sama Moderator
Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2294
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:29 am Post subject: |
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I think it goes without saying that #2 is a whole lot better then #1
Not that there is anything wrong with number one. It very detailed and has excelent coloring. But when it's compared to #2 it looks a bit statue-like, there's no sense of movement. #2 is a much more dynamic pose and angle, he looks alive. I notice the esyes look a bit larger and livlier as well. There's a lot of expression in them, something the first one lacked as well.
Mine:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-229233.html _________________ [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v142/DG-sama/avatars/kingsig.jpg[/img]
God damn you signature WORK! |
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DragonicFlames Very Oldbie
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Posts: 2562 Location: Hiding behind a tombstone
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:51 am Post subject: |
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Dg-sama's pic:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-229233.html
(doing strata format)
Strong Points:
-Good coloring (very good color sceme [sp?]) all the colors match and blend well together
-Very good shading/shining.
-Smooth feeling to it, carefree, happy, easy.
Weak points:
-Not really feeling the whole water thing. If he had just been in the water, his hair should be wet and driping, driping water, etc.
-Where did those bubbles come from. Oo; Is he moving his tail?
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My favorite picture out of my whole gallery:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-183314.html _________________ [img]http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b362/Dragonicflamesfac/DFsig2.jpg[/img]
[u]Thank You, Layz :heart:[/u] |
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Rindi_chan Forum contributor
Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 696 Location: Nara, Japan
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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Aw, the pose is very cute. I like the facial expressions, and that figure on the chain amuses me. The tails also add an interesting element of flow/movement to the picture, although you could have made the lines thinner so that they didn't detract from the characters' faces.
What's that coming out of the taller character's (I can't tell if they're male or female, or what, gomen!) back? At first I thought it was a ponytail, and then I thought that maybe it was a wing... I think it's a wing. I guess that if it's a ponytail, it shouldn't stick out to the side like that, but fall according to the rules of gravity (although I guess anime characters' hair usually ignores those rules). And if it's a wing it should be more... uhm... wing-shaped. Right now, it looks kind of scraggly and none-too-useful.
The shorter characters' tail also looks like it was pasted right on top of its clothes - the shirt should probably be lying on top of the tail, not behind it. I see that you made the attempt with a clothing wrinkle, but the bottom of the shirt is still too low, so I'm not convinced.
Fingers on the tall character could use some more definition, shorter character's upper arm could be a bit shorter... Meh, picky little proportional things. Overall, it's quite good, although I'm not sure where the taller character's legs are. Is he wearing a long coat of some sort?
Sorry for ripping that apart, but this is a critique thread, after all. Well, hopefully my criticism was constructive. *sighs* Hm. I guess I ought to link to something now... How about this? |
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MedalMask Forum Stalker
Joined: 01 Mar 2005 Posts: 1765 Location: saten's asshole
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 4:48 pm Post subject: |
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Ok, DF Let's see about your picture.
Strong Points:
-Romantic title
-The tails
-The exprssion
Weak Point's
-The annotomy- the legs...the girls are too big, the guys are to small
-the heads are too small
That's my crituqe
Now, crituqe mine, meahaha:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-230193.html _________________ Wyat Fucking Earp! |
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chaosmega Very bored
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 150
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:55 pm Post subject: |
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Very nicely done. Here's my critique
Strong points:
+Very good form
+nice muscle definition
+excellent coloring and shading
Weak Points:
-eyes are a little too close together
okay here's mine |
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MedalMask Forum Stalker
Joined: 01 Mar 2005 Posts: 1765 Location: saten's asshole
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:19 pm Post subject: |
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blah blah, in my ass that the eyes are too damn close, I'm nto crituqing yours right now, I;m tired, maybe in the morning. <_< _________________ Wyat Fucking Earp! |
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DragonicFlames Very Oldbie
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Posts: 2562 Location: Hiding behind a tombstone
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:02 am Post subject: |
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[quote]And if it's a wing it should be more... uhm... wing-shaped. Right now, it looks kind of scraggly and none-too-useful.[/quote]\
Not supposed to be used. That's why it's crappy. He's a werewolf =^-^= gave him the wing to add some detail to his clothes.
[quote] Is he wearing a long coat of some sort?[/quote]
Yeah, ^^;
[quote]The annotomy- the legs...the girls are too big, the guys are to small[/quote]
I'm guessing your spelling error was for the body parts right? 1) Both characters are wearing different kind of pants. Girl = Big baggy Guy= not baggy
[quote]-the heads are too small[/quote]
? small? Thought they fit their bodies fine
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OMNI-X Very bored
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:03 am Post subject: |
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[quote="chaosmega (chaos)"] Very nicely done. Here's my critique
Strong points:
+Very good form
+nice muscle definition
+excellent coloring and shading
Weak Points:
-eyes are a little too close together
okay here's mine [/quote]
The Good:
- nice drawing style
- cartoony, but very nice proportions
The Not-So-Good:
- goatee looks like spew at first glance
Overall, it's nicely done. It'll work well with a valentines card!
Here's mine:
[b]**Warning! Large Pic and contains some nudity!!!![/b]
Babes & Blades: The Valkyrie & Centauress.
The line art is done, there are no shadings (like most of my work) since I'm practicing on this piece with Photoshop. |
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