Writing From The Heart

Lasher · Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2004 10:16 pm Post subject:

Over the years, i've found myself writing out little ideas and opinions on things going on around me. And how i feel about things, my views, how i preceive the world. Well, i finally got one of them up. I was really curious as to wether it would make any sense or not. Seeing as i wrote it in a completely fit of self doubt and an emotional state.

I always thought to myself, that i had the perfect ideas on how to write something like that, in that moment, when i was feeling strongest about it. I just never thought i'd be able to write it out so that it would make any since to any one.

So i'm asking you, and everyone who is curious and open minded and passionate about life or anything in general, to just take a quick look at it, give me your two [i]honest[/i] cents on it by commenting. I'm really thinking about posting these sort of things more often.

But i'd like some feedback on them.

And if anyone feels like i do, and has any ideas or questions, go ahead and spit them out. i'm all ears. And who knows, you might get me thinking on a certain topic and next thing you know, something or someone could set me off, and i might go writing about it and have it posted for all to see and think on.

It's nothing dreamy or fancy. It's more heavy, depth felt and passionate really. It's not little girl material, it has a more mature tune to it so to speak. Any how. Here's the link.

http://www.fanart-central.net/stories.php?sid=4678

thanks to any one who all ready commented on it. I really appreciate it.

Lexar · Forum Stalker Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Posts: 1129

Well I read it, but I don't agree with it.

Lasher · Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 9:43 am Post subject:

That's perfectly fine pookie. It's opinionated writing really. No one has to agree with it.

And fallen, i borrowed you pet name. Thank you.

fallenangel · Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 1:17 pm Post subject:

S'ok, I borrowed it from Greg Proops. He gave me bitchkitty last time I saw him...only been able to use it once. Sad

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Paru · Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 2:26 pm Post subject:

That's some good writing there, Lasher. Makes a person think.
You could be a philosopher. Wink

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Lasher · Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2004 8:59 pm Post subject:

Haha, thanks Paru. That would be fun really. then again i think i am all ready. Just not noticed or paid for it. To bad.

VR_Jay · Very Oldbie Joined: 13 Apr 2004 Posts: 2725

i likes fil-os-o-fe! (my southern redkneck taking hold)

but in all seriousness, good stuff there. It does make you think....
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Grissey · Member Joined: 03 Apr 2004 Posts: 106

My honest cents.. I think it lacks structure, it seems to head a direction, a way but you never seem to get to a real point. What is is you want to point out? Family is evil? As Lexar pointed out, family can be very important to some people. My family, for example, has a south american background who really passionately care for one another. Your essay does absolutely not apply to them nor most of families throughout the world. But, ok, this must be YOUR view on things and not THE view on things. I thought it would be a deep story but as I said before it promised a lot, but in the end I could not see any point or REAL deep story. I read more deep stories by people younger than you...