Need Help With My Fanfiction!

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

Ok I have a whole Fanfiction story thought up but I have two problems right now!
Here are my problems:
1. I need a title.....(can't think of one! If you need info on the story Just ask and I will gladly give some...)
2. The chapters are in parts....(like part one of chapter one, then part two of chapter one...etc....) how do I post the different parts? Together or seprate!?

Can anybaody help me with these problems!?

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

[quote="SassyBotan8990 (Hieis_True_Lover"]
1. I need a title.....(can't think of one! If you need info on the story Just ask and I will gladly give some...)
[/quote]
it's kind of obvious we need to know what the damn story is about
<_<

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

:ph34r: Opps sorry! ok well the story is about my character Shiei and Hiei...... It is based on the show but not really....... Like it starts out durring the dark Tourament and It is the finals and Hiei has to fight Shiei......... They eventully fall in love with each other..........is that enough info!? that was basically a sumarry of the first chapter with out ruining the whole story! does that help!?

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

wow, the first chapter really tells you alot about hte story.

if we don't know what the entire storyline is about, how is anyone supposed to make a title?

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

well actually that was the first chapter and part of the second..... ummm let me try this.......here are some qutes from the story......

Narrator: It's right after Kurama's fight with Karusu (did I spell that right??) The team thought it was a win but it was counted as a lose cause Kurama was down for ten counts! Darn! Now it is Hiei's turn to fight and he is fighting a female demon named Shiei...she acts just like Hiei, well at least the attitude is the same...and they both dress similar, freaky! Well the fight is about to start Here we go, Hiei VS Shiei....

That's the opening for chapter one! Does that help at all?

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

i give up. whatever.

that won't help at all.

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

Do i have to post the entire fanfiction for a title idea!? Oh well if you can't help with that problem what about the other problem i have?

2. The chapters are in parts....(like part one of chapter one, then part two of chapter one...etc....) how do I post the different parts? Together or seprate!?

Can you help with that instead!? I can think of a title some how......

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

do it as:

Part one:

(story)

Part 2:

(story)

i guess...

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

ok thanks! that helps! nevermind about the title! if you can't think of anything i will try and think of one! thanks anyways!

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

you're welcome?

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

[quote="akutatsu_no_kuno_hi (zinovia)"] How about giving a link to the story you have posted, if it's actually posted?
If not then a summary of your story will be very much helpful, because we can't help with the rather confusing information you have posted. [/quote]
exactly. ^_^

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

Um... It isn't posted anywheres and it is pretty long so i haven't made a summary yet but basically it is about how my character Shiei meets Hiei and how they fall in long and how them being in love effects them and stuff like that! Does this help untill i get an actual summary?

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

get a summary or i can't help at all Razz

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

well there is an conflict.......in the being Hiei and Shiei are on oppsite sides! they have to fight each other in battle! But I will try and make a better summarry.............. but right now . . . .

i am tired so i will post the summarry tomorrow...ok!? the other conflict I guess is Hiei and Shiei trying to understand what love is.....but that goes along with the lovey part..... but they have to fight againest each other in battle...so that's just one of the conflicts!

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

sorry for sounding rude, but the names are a little corny too...

Hiei and Shiei? damn, did they HAVE to rhyme?

i agree 100% with akutatsu_no_kuno_hi..

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

[quote="akutatsu_no_kuno_hi (zinovia)"] I'm going to have to go with silver dreams. I mean, come one...Shiei has to be one of the worst anime oc names I have ever seen. Forgive my rudeness but it's the honest truth. You should give her a name that best suits her personality. I have a couplpe oc's, one called Moro. A name like that sounds like a shy, mysterious girl. Well, at least it does to me... Rolling eyes

I guess the conflict sounds okay...although it's been done many times to a point where it's justa cliche theme, I won't judge it yet until I see the full details of the conflict.
And, I guess we'll see you soon... [/quote]
sounds like she ran out of ideas and just decided to shove a S in front of Hiei's name.

and just call me Silver, btw. no need to type out silver dreams every time ^_^

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

^_^ Well The name came from the fact that Hiei is a boy and his name sounds like "he" and Shiei is a girl and it sounds like "she".....Lame I know but that's where the idea of her name came from......Oh and That summary I am still working on it.....! The story is long so it is taking awhile....The first chapter alone has 4 parts to it! so give me some time..........as far as a title goes one of my friends suggested "Hiei the unbeatable?" But I think it is a little too orignal....what do you guys think!? maybe this would be easier if you read the story....But i don't want to post the story on the forum...It is really long! my friend has only read part one of chapter one but if you want me to post the story I will....but it is really long..... :ph34r:

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

[quote="SassyBotan8990 (Hieis_True_Lover"] ^_^ Well The name came from the fact that Hiei is a boy and his name sounds like "he" and Shiei is a girl and it sounds like "she".....Lame I know but that's where the idea of her name came from......Oh and That summary I am still working on it.....! The story is long so it is taking awhile....The first chapter alone has 4 parts to it! so give me some time..........as far as a title goes one of my friends suggested "Hiei the unbeatable?" But I think it is a little too orignal....what do you guys think!? maybe this would be easier if you read the story....But i don't want to post the story on the forum...It is really long! my friend has only read part one of chapter one but if you want me to post the story I will....but it is really long..... :ph34r: [/quote]
"Hiei the Unbeatable"?

*falls over laughing*

Shiei and Hiei, now this? do yourself a favor and think up new naems

(excuse my rudeness, i'm pissed off at someone right now <_<)

and you can post it on FC then leave a link in the Fanfiction Critique thread if you want it edited.

SassyBotan8990 · Very bored Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Posts: 163

[quote="silver_dreams (silver)"]
"Hiei the Unbeatable"?

*falls over laughing*

Shiei and Hiei, now this? do yourself a favor and think up new naems

(excuse my rudeness, i'm pissed off at someone right now <_<)

and you can post it on FC then leave a link in the Fanfiction Critique thread if you want it edited. [/quote]
how do u post it on FC then leave a link in the Fanfiction Critique thread if you want it edited. (i am new to posting Fanfictions.... i mostly just post pics.....my first real fanfiction....)

silver_dreams · Elder Than Dirt Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102

post it on fc.

look on the FAQ or the Help section as to how.