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slimfast Very bored

Joined: 08 Jun 2004 Posts: 169
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 2:26 pm Post subject: |
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not as bad as mine & nothin' wrong with Duff McKagan. just hillary duff |
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LadyoftheDeadlyDance Forum Stalker

Joined: 13 May 2004 Posts: 1144
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:00 pm Post subject: |
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Uh...one of my characters sings this in my story...it's kinda Blues-ish, though.
So will I find my day?
Or will I always be payin'?
There's no time to play
But There's somethin' I should be sayin'
Will I be shakin' in my boots?
And be crushed down to my roots?
Or will I ever see my dream?
Or will reality break at the seams?
Dear morning sunrise please save my soul
From the devils that will unfold
And the angels at my back
From all that I lack
For I'll be tethered.
...It's incomplete, and utter crap. |
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ragingflea002 Oldbie

Joined: 09 Apr 2004 Posts: 2229 Location: Charleston
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:35 pm Post subject: |
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That looks good, LDD.
I'll record guitar for my work someday, and post it for you.
I wish to dedicate this to all the "goths" out there. Pure sarcasm, all of it. Tons of truth, though.
Look at me
Child of the dark
With my powdered face
And black mark
Light a candle
Shed a tear
Write depressing s**t
No one wants to hear
Put on my makeup
Dressed in black
Put in some Manson s**t
And sit on back
f**k some ugly chick
With issues like me
Watch her moan and laugh
Wants to be under
Six feet
Watch me
I'm so depressed
Hear me
I'm so dead
f**k me
You wanna feel my pain
Read my crap
It's written in my blood
Walk in the streets
Never smile again
Beg for attention and
Beg for it again
Wear your silver spikes
And Hot Topic too
Spike your hair to God
So they notice you
Straighten your hair
And dye it black
Buy some fucked up s**t
And don't turn back
Hear my Manson cry
And Slipknot too
You know that
We all die
What's stopping you
Fear me
I'm the kid in black
Kill me
You know I want you to
Burn me
I don't think it hurts
Be like me
You look good in the outfit too
Think back a year
Before this phase
Used to smile a lot
I got good grades
I had a damn good time
I loved it so
Then I saw my real face
I thought I was a ghost
I felt really cold(turn up the heat)
I knew death was my friend(you liar bitch)
Christains are so fucked up(just like your mom)
They can't comprehend(wanna bet?)
Catholics are fucked up too(just like you)
They think they know me well(like we all do)
They know nothing of my pain(you pathetic f**k)
They never will, too(you fucker s**t)
I am
Children of the night
Watch me
I'll play you a song
Feel me
I'm wicked to the bone
Death is
My only friend
My only friend(damn right, bitch)
My only friend(sick f**k....)
My only friend(makes me laugh)
My only friend(bitch)
That's for all those poser goths and punks. If you're the real deal, then you'll laugh at this. _________________ Not all who wander are lost.
"The separation between spirit and logic is reasonable because spirit is defined by faith and logic forces others to think about what they have faith in." |
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BladeMaster Rookie

Joined: 06 Jun 2004 Posts: 41
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 8:31 pm Post subject: |
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My last song sucked this is much better
Guys with glasses
What is wrong with me? Every time I see a guy with glasses
I fall head over my heals
But Im too shy to say Hi Im too shy
Maybe some day, one day hell say hi to me
Im too afraid to speak they must think Im such a freak
A new crush Im not in a rush
But still these guys have looks that kill
*Chorus*
Guys with glasses what are my chances?
When they look at me I freeze
And I think pretty please talk to me
Guys with glasses what are my chances?
Theyre so hot and Im not
Guys with glasses are cute but Im mute
Im just a girl a young girl
Looking for someone, someone who wont run and hide
Why Im I denied?
So if youre a guy with glasses
Please come speak to me
Make it easy
*Chorus*
Guys with glasses what are my chances?
When they look at me I freeze
And I think pretty please talk to me
Guys with glasses what are my chances?
Theyre so hot and Im not
Guys with glasses are cute but Im mute
I am very happy now ^_^ |
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plungergirl Still very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 294
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 12:25 pm Post subject: |
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I knew there was a forum like this!! *grin* that's why I didn't make another thread... I'll bring it back to life... perhaps... I'm gonna try writing a song... I've always wanted to, and I've written a couple of poems... so anyway, the other day, I sat down and wrote a 1st verse and chorus... so yeah, please tell me what you think and what I could improve...
It seems that life is like a puzzle
With missing pieces, mismatched pieces
There's no guide to show you
You can't look at it, when pieces don't fit
I try to find my pieces
Try to make myself complete
But however hard I try
[i]Chorus[/i]
You say that something's not right
With me
You tell me I need to change
For me
But there's always two sides
To me
How am I supposed to change
The way my mind works??
No matter what I do
I'll never be perfect
I'm always imperfect |
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ragingflea002 Oldbie

Joined: 09 Apr 2004 Posts: 2229 Location: Charleston
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:32 pm Post subject: |
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I was f**king around with an idea for a "punk" mock up.
(enter with a single powerchord intro)
She's so punk with her black makeup
And her heroin and marijuana crave
She loves to whine about
Her own damn life and how
Everything's wrong
It's like a chain
That she likes to wear around her neck
It's nothing but a bunch of wire
Although you gotta hand it to her
Because if she didn't
We'd have to hear about how fucked up we are
(enter guitar w/much distortion)
(bass enters with moderate bassline)
She's a punk
A whining dirty punk
She loves her drugs and liquor
She found in her dad's truck
She's a punk
A normal everyday punk
She ain't unique
And she sure ain't special
So what's her problem
(guitar exits with short solo)
She loves that marijuana and
That heroin does her good too
She seems to get it from her dad
And her mom has nothin to lose
She got knocked up
Say twenty times and now our
Punk's adopted
Feeling unloved
Guess she hates her life
What else is there to offer
(repeat chorus, but guitar is more distorted)
(after chorus, drums and bass solo for 10 seconds)
(guitar solo enters, fast paced and should be 2:10 at most)
(repeat chorus)
She's a punk
We like her anyway
She always seems to know what up
And gives her stuff away
Her daddy's never home
Her mom is gone away
All she has do do is school
And someone else along the way
(closes with the same intro for bass, yet a small solo for guitar) _________________ Not all who wander are lost.
"The separation between spirit and logic is reasonable because spirit is defined by faith and logic forces others to think about what they have faith in." |
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