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GreenStar5323 My First Post!

Joined: 10 Jan 2005 Posts: 1
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:00 pm Post subject: |
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The Ed of Time
By: GreenStar5323
Summary: An Ed, Edd, n Eddy/Chrono Trigger crossover. For some miraculous reason, the Eds are sent to another dimension and end up at the Millennium Fair and meet Crono. They have NO idea whats coming, do they? Theyre will PROBALLY be romance with Double D and Lucca. DONT KILL ME!!! >.< I will also add two OCs for Ed and Eddy!
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It was a beautiful day in the Peach Creek Cul-De-Sac. Sarah and Jimmy were playing with dolls and stuff animals on Sarah's front lawn. Rolf and Kevin were playing football as Naz watches. Johnny, well, he was talking with his piece of wood, Plank. Yep, everything was perfect in the Cul-De-Sac Well, almost perfect.
Just outside the Cul-De-Sac was Peach Creek Forest. There, in the middle of the forest, were the Eds. Ed, Edd (aka Double D), and Eddy are their names. Ed was the tall, not-so-bright one of the group, Double D was the average, smart one, and Eddy was the short, greedy one that thinks hes the center of the universe. Anyways, the reason they were in the forest was to think of some scams to do on the kids. Usually, they would go to the Peach Creek dump to think, but the Kanker Sisters were there today, looking for the Eds. So, the next best thing was the forest. Anyways, like I said, the Eds were thinking of new scams to do.
Ahhh!!! I cant think of NOTHING!!! said Eddy, angrily, pulling at the only three hairs on his head.
Double D then looked at Eddy and rolled his eyes at him, I doubt youll come up with anything if you keep doing that.
Oh yeah, well youre not coming up with anything either, Double D. Eddy said to Double D.
Before an argument was about to unfold, they both heard a familiar voice.
EDDY! DOUBLE D!!!
Ed then came running up to them, panting.
What is it, Lumpy? Eddy asked.
IvefoundsomethinginacaveandIdontknowwhatitis! Ed said, all in a one-word sentence.
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Slow down so we can understand, Ed. Double D said, trying to calm Ed down.
Ive found something in a cave and I dont know what it is. Ed repeated.
What did it look like, Ed? Double D asked.
It was all swirly and blue and it was up on a wall. Ed explained as best as he could.
Hmm, show us where this cave is? Double D said.
Its this way! Ed said as he ran deeper into the forest.
I say hes making it all up. Eddy said to Double D as they followed Ed.
I dont think so, Eddy, why would Ed lie? Double D said.
My point exactly. Come on. Double D said as they ran deeper into the forest.
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Sorry if it was short, but I wonder what the thing Ed is talking about? Oh, wait, I know, but I'm not telling you! You'll just have to wait and see what happens next! |
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silver_dreams Elder Than Dirt

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 5102
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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oh my f**king god....can you not read?!
THERE IS A TOPIC MADE THAT ALREADY SAYS THAT ALL FICTION SHOULD BE POSTED IN CRITIQUES IF YOU WANT FEEDBACK, OR A LINK TO IT IN SELF-PROMOTION IF YOU JUST WANT HITS! THE FANFICTION FORUM IS NOT FOR PEOPLE TO JUST RANDOMLY POST THEIR CRAPPY FANFICTION!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU ALL, YOU GODDAMN MOTHERFUCKING IDIOTS?!??!?!?!?!?
you wanna know what i think about that little s**t drabble you try and pass off as decent fanfiction? i think it's s**t. pure and total s**t.
read the rules, post in the right place, and get some goddamn talent.
(excuse the outburst, i'm just really pissed off at these people now..) |
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Rebus Very bored

Joined: 23 Jul 2004 Posts: 224
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 10:34 am Post subject: |
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Hey there GreenStar
This Thread will tell you where to post your work depending on whether you'd just like us to read it, or whether you'd like help improving it.
silver dreams... You know, that was her first post. I don't really care how much sleep you've had to be honest, there was no need for that.
Incidentally... Why censor the word s**t if you're going to use the word motherf**king without any asterixes? |
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silver_dreams Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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's**t' is censored automatically. |
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