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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 10:56 am Post subject: |
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Three, out of five. Great for a sketch, just not my style. You understand ;)
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HeavenlyKunoichi Very bored

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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 6:11 am Post subject: |
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I really like it, the colors go very well together. And I love the undefinateness (is that even a word O.o of the picture. The picture is very distinct but yet it seems like there could be so much more..that's a good thing
So I give it an 8.5/10
Here is my picture
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14257974/
I know it is harder to rate art on comics, but please try as bets as you can ^_^ |
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VR_Jay Very Oldbie

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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 10:21 pm Post subject: |
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6/10. I see some spelling errors, grammar errors, as well as a bit of repetitive dialogue. The dilogue is the first thing one should concentrate on. Read it out loud to yourself. If it sounds stale, using too many of the same words, repetitive, then revise it.
I do like the last frame. ^_^
Ok, new one.
CLICKY _________________ [img]http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/Anti_Commecial_Banners_by_Nevar530.jpg[/img] [img]http://s2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/th_myvsweetkiss1xc.gif[/img]
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KeheiZero Elder In Training

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Proto_ Newb

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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2005 1:58 pm Post subject: |
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Given that it fits the visual style of its source material (although Daisy never appeared in Paper Mario . . . but I guess that's the point, eh? ) . . . hmm... 4 of 5.
Okay . . . next up, this one!
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LadyoftheDeadlyDance Forum Stalker

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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:03 pm Post subject: |
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Very very good, Strata! Its gorgeous, love the pose and the anatomy of the anthro, very original. I like the fact that he's more dog-like than just the standard dog-eared, human anthro. The coloring is beautiful, by the way. 5 out of 5
My turn: http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=171246 |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 6:29 pm Post subject: |
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[quote]I like the fact that he's more dog-like than just the standard dog-eared, human anthro.[/quote]
Is it possible to describe just how much I HATE those "standard" kinds of anthros? I just can't stand seeing dogeared and foxtailed humans day in day out.... _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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LadyoftheDeadlyDance Forum Stalker

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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:08 pm Post subject: |
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Indeed, I understand, hence the reason why I was so thrilled that your anthro was different from the norm ^^ |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:43 am Post subject: |
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... And that's [i]my[/i] norm ;)
Okay, time to get back on topic....
[quote]http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=171246[/quote]
Hmm.... sketchy, and photoshopped, not exactly my style, hmmm . . . I'll be nice and call it at 3 of 5.
Next up, I'll toss another anthro into the mix and -- hey, did anyone notice that artist gallery listings are broken down into pages of 25 at a time, now?
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eclipsedmoongoddess482 Elder In Training

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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 11:20 am Post subject: |
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9/10
Damn! That is amazing Strata. The details alone are excellent. ^_^
Here's my pic. Forgive the crappy shading on the lips. It was my first time drawing Axl Rose. 'Least it got me an A+ in my Drawing class. ^_^ _________________ Vaccum cleaners may look fun, but are deadly sex toys. as are certain vegetables like, terri schiavo -Powtaz |
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cptShort Member

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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm. The lineart waves a bit in some places, and isn't always in the best proportion. But seeing as it was your first time with him, and it's still very good, plus the shading is [i]awesome[/i], I give it an 8/10.
[u]Mine's somewhere in this sentance.[/u]
Sorry, I wanted to try that. |
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RubyconCream Member

Joined: 12 Oct 2004 Posts: 85 Location: Orange County, California
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 6:39 am Post subject: |
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7/10
I can't see it very well. it needs to be darkened a little by a program. hold on let me do that.
(3 minutes later)
Whoa! BIG CHANGE! That is nice! That is REAL NICE! I really like how careful you were! that's really professional! *.*
My turn.
[img]http://img224.exs.cx/img224/861/img2650bn.jpg[/img]
I can think of 50 things wrong with this picture ,but i'am going to shut up becuase I 'am my own worst enemy. _________________ [img]http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9541/rcsigbl4.gif[/img]
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VR_Jay Very Oldbie

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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 9:22 am Post subject: |
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8/10. I don't see anything wrong with it. Her skin is a tad orange (too much fake tan, perhaps? ^_^ ) but the drawing is very good.
Ok, here is one of mine. _________________ [img]http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/Anti_Commecial_Banners_by_Nevar530.jpg[/img] [img]http://s2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/th_myvsweetkiss1xc.gif[/img]
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:29 am Post subject: |
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Hmm. Four of five, although the description is worth a bonus point.
Next up, can you believe I actually used the word 'kitsune' in one of my drawings?
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 11:28 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like a three out of five to me....
Time for another one. This one isn't my best either, but you just take it in stride and keep moving, right?
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L7 Very bored

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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 8:40 pm Post subject: |
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I'll give it a 6. Good job on the hair and the thingy its holding.
Heres mine.
http://fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=173582
Theres some language be warned. Sorry if the premise of it makes you angry. I have an opinion. Pleez I beg of you don't get angry! |
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PunchenAngel666 Has No Life

Joined: 28 Sep 2004 Posts: 525 Location: the hell why are they asking?
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2005 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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dont mined if i comment do yah? i'd give it like a 5 or a 6 between the two i like the writing and i think the charcter is sweet looking but i think there could be more. heres mine :
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Dogss Would like fries with that

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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2005 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm...how did you do those blood spats? O.O It's nicely colored, and the shoes are ok, but it's not my taste. I don't know why, but the subjuct matter appeares juvenile to me. I'm not feeling it. 2/10
Here's my latest...
http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=177493
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lucifer Very bored

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