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samuri_kid Very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 231 Location: I'm in a chair, rocking back and forwards, With a gun pointed at the Door!?!
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 6:29 am Post subject: |
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Oh cool i was going to do a topic bout poems how cool I rit this the other day it ain't that good but i like it by the way that poem is deep dude it's really good. ^_^
this is mine its called:
[b][u]Love and agony[/u][/b]
You want to love,
You want to hide,
You want to cover yourself with pride,
But when you lose her,
you think it's over,
you want to end it,
you want to over,
you've lost the bottle,
you can't do it,
you try again to love,
but you're through with it.
can't wait to see you others writing... _________________ [color=blue]No matter what happens, even if you become the world's enemy,I'll be your knight.- Squall-Final Fantasy VIII[/color]
[color=green]Someday I will be queen, but I will always be myself.-Garnet/Dagger- Final Fantasy IX[/color]
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samuri_kid Very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 231 Location: I'm in a chair, rocking back and forwards, With a gun pointed at the Door!?!
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:04 am Post subject: |
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Wow that is dark and it's good ^_^ how many poems have you got i've only started writing poems again so i've only got a few??? _________________ [color=blue]No matter what happens, even if you become the world's enemy,I'll be your knight.- Squall-Final Fantasy VIII[/color]
[color=green]Someday I will be queen, but I will always be myself.-Garnet/Dagger- Final Fantasy IX[/color]
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Powtaz Oldbie

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2140
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:22 am Post subject: |
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let me create a poem right now....
Alone walked the rage driven ox,
Through thickened shadows of death,
its sorrow and pain, a life filled with vain,
Until someone through giant rocks
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cherry-chi-hiwatari Forum Stalker

Joined: 23 Jan 2005 Posts: 1143
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:01 am Post subject: |
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this is the only one i can remember at the moment , ....a friend has it as her sig i think...unless theyve changed it .....
me.
i tell my friends i feel no pain ,
i tell them i dont hear the rain .
thell them i dont care what people say ,
i tell them this , but feel another way
i tell them that i know no fear
but i would rather be anywhere but here
i never let people see ,
the real scared little me
i like the person i pretend to be
but thats not me , not im reality ,
the real me sits at home
crying in a corner all alone ...
wow.....i forgot how terrible that was....... |
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Powtaz Oldbie

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2140
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:08 am Post subject: |
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writes another three second poem:
The night was at ease,
As calm as the sun,
Channeled my love,
a war had begun
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samuri_kid Very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 231 Location: I'm in a chair, rocking back and forwards, With a gun pointed at the Door!?!
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 9:21 am Post subject: |
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This is a quick poem i made up last week:
[u]Dark cry[/u]
i want to cry,
i want to die,
stick a pin in my eye,
through me in the stream,
let me quiver,
and let me drown to the bottom of the river...
this one i made up in 30 seconds???
[u]blind killing[/u]
i cant hear you,
i cant see you,
all the time i want to feel you,
leave me be,
i want to see,
you kill me...
_________________ [color=blue]No matter what happens, even if you become the world's enemy,I'll be your knight.- Squall-Final Fantasy VIII[/color]
[color=green]Someday I will be queen, but I will always be myself.-Garnet/Dagger- Final Fantasy IX[/color]
[img]http://a483.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/33/l_e3dc9b159fed6e6ecb001f89d37790ba.jpg[/img] [b][u]<<Onwards to My Gallery[/b][/u] |
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PhunkYMunkY Site Helper

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 7772 Location: windmillz 'n' keyfists, yo'
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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I exist because you want me to
I believe in you because you are true
People will look and people will stare
At your little monster but do I care
I breathe for you and you alone
You are my sanctuary and you are my home
You keep me fed and keep me fit
I am your guardian litle Brit.
I got bored 3 minutes ao. Thankyou for brutally stealing 3 and a half minutes of my life
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ariel Still very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 298
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 5:28 am Post subject: |
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enjoyed the pain with no tears
enterd deeper without no fear
smiled happly with a knife
im not afraid to take your life
voices up in my head telling me to go to bed _________________ Labels are for everything. |
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Nova_Eclipse Has No Life

Joined: 27 May 2004 Posts: 451
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:35 am Post subject: |
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[u]wondering why[/u]
[i]As the night falls upon us,
I sit alone wondering why.
Why must I be this way,
Why can't I just be myself?
Through the darkness,
I see no light nor an answer.
I look through the window,
The light of dawn starts to shine.
I stand up and tell myself,
"just another day of being him,
then you can be yourself".
Then the cycle starts again.[/i]
Funny the things ICT puts into your head |
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hikari0205 Forum Stalker

Joined: 24 Jan 2005 Posts: 1678 Location: England
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:09 am Post subject: |
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this is one that i made up in class. it took me like 5 mins to do and its absolutly terrible!
[u][i]Why?
[/i][/u] Why do i find it so hard?
To laugh, be happy, make friends.
Why do i find it so hard?
To be same as all of the rest.
Instead of shopping, sleepovers and make-up,
I like darkness, quietness and fear.
But how does that make me so different?
It's not like ive got dumbo ears.
What makes me so different is fear
Fear of every one near
told ya it was terrible! ^_^ |
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Nova_Eclipse Has No Life

Joined: 27 May 2004 Posts: 451
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Its better than the one I posted that one took me 20minutes.... I really should start my coursework.... |
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Powtaz Oldbie

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2140
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 7:32 am Post subject: |
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hey mister, mister
please show me to ur sister,
theres a hole in my contact lens,
and i cant see her...
mister, mister,
i'm madly in love with ur sister,
though i can't see her eyes,
and i can't see her smile,
theres somethin about her that
makes me worthwhile....
ohhh, mister, mister,
please take me to the doctor
I'm loosing my sight,
and you smell like pee.
:ph34r:
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hikari0205 Forum Stalker

Joined: 24 Jan 2005 Posts: 1678 Location: England
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 8:35 am Post subject: |
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vry gud pow! ^_^ |
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Powtaz Oldbie

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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 8:39 am Post subject: |
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i'd like to thank my friends and family |
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Nova_Eclipse Has No Life

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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:40 pm Post subject: |
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Ahhhh powtaz, we can always rely on you to brighten up our days with your special brand of insanity |
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hikari0205 Forum Stalker

Joined: 24 Jan 2005 Posts: 1678 Location: England
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 9:17 am Post subject: |
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they are good.........so much better than mine! ^_^ |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

Joined: 24 Sep 2004 Posts: 3100 Location: Lala land *hums*
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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ok, why is almost every single poem dark, or lonely, or sad?! Sheesh people, lighten up.
Dawn
Two raods lie ahead,
Leading to dark and light
So smiliar, et as different
as day, and night
Most choose one
Or the other
Yet the ties that bind them
to each other
If you look closely
Just in between
Another road lies,
Invisible, Unseen
A light road of gray
That reams on real
But that sudden chill you feel
Proves it to be real
Will you take the road to twilight
Watch the sun fade
And day turn to night
Where darkness and light lie
No matter how strong...
No, that's not right,
It's the road to dawn
It's for KH Chain of Memories. At the end of Reverse/Rebith. It isn't happy and cheery, but sure isn't as dark as some of yours. Man, is anyone here like going through major deppression or something??? |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

Joined: 24 Sep 2004 Posts: 3100 Location: Lala land *hums*
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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I know, but if you look at the first page, every single poem is about suffering. Man, lighten up people. The world isn't ending anytimes soon. Unless global warming continues and the polarice caps melt causing a catastrophic flood that wipes out life as we know it, [i]but[/i] that's not happening anytime soon. |
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unfocused Moderator

Joined: 17 Jul 2004 Posts: 6983 Location: Texas
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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:02 am Post subject: |
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A paragraph from
Fiercely I Love You, Suddenly I Lose You
In the dark I close my eyes.
The cold grips and twists my spine.
From this chamber I'll scream,
I won't stop until I choke.
The chains will hold me,
the fire will even scold me,
but only until I let go.
Bruise and break me,
slit my throat,
come beat me until I feel again,
just don't leave me alone.
My heart has been skinned,
the bone is like steel.
The scorching surface consumes my flesh.
On my knees, grabbing my chest,
I breathe out fumes, igniting the room...
with a steam all too familar. _________________ "edit : i luv james" - Layzcarter |
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coolgirlkdd Forum contributor

Joined: 07 Apr 2004 Posts: 704
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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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what would happen?
[i]what would happen to the world if i die?
would people not care,or start to cry?
a lot of people don't like me,
and a handful doesn't respect me.
But you were one of the few who cared for me.
you you I can be myself you see.
what would happen to [b]you[/b] if i die?
yould you not care,or start to cry?
you are one of the few people who cared for me.
and you respected me,
you loved me[/i]
thats one
untill the end of time
[i]untill the end of time
when old men cry
and children die
you will still be by my side.
[/i]
and two _________________ [align=center][color=red]
Too many times I've seen this, rip a whole into our friendship... 4 words to choke apon
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