Post Your Poems!

[SilentSoul92]

Can you feel the light summer breeze?
Let go of your troubles and drift away
To a paradise where you can rest at ease
Where the stream gurgles and plams sway
Where you can close your eyes and just relax
Where you can finally sleep
Don't call this fake, don't worry about facts
For if you awaken, you shall weep

[Meow_Kitty_Kitty]

Well, my boyfriend wrote me this poem :wub: He's so sweet

I LUV U BABBY,
I CANT GET ENOUGH OF U.
I WISH U WOULD LAY ME.
I JUST WANT YOU 2 NO,
YOUR MY LIFE,
SON, MOON AND STARS.
WILL YOU BE MY WIFE
ILL GET U BOYS AND CARS
JUST BE MINE
DONT GO WID NO 1 ELSE
YOU JUST SO FINE
WEN I LOOK @ U MY EYE MELTS .....THATS HOW HOT YOU R!!

[Meow_Kitty_Kitty]

*meow*

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

the poem was....erm...intresting , to say the least :huh:...i take it this guy likes you ...a lot.

[Nova_Eclipse]

... well ... um.... at least your boyfriend knows what he wants and is honest about it lol, guys like me would probably never write something like that lol

[KotokoPlum]

[quote="Genkai (Naska)"] Ok well first off, don't double post- that's spamming already. And your second post was completely pointless anyways. If you want to add something into a previous post, just edit it and tack it in.
Second.. that poem was very [i]interesting.[/i] Hm, I'm not quite sure what to say towards it that won't be offensive, so I won't say a thing. [/quote]
I totally agree...

((Nice new avatar, Genkai! ^^))

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

if someone wrote me anything like that id probably hit them into next tuesday !! i nearly did do that once actually even though it was all of it directed at my friend, not me, i still got a bit angry about it .

[Nova_Eclipse]

this is more of the kind of peom i'd give to a girlfriend... if i had one TT_TT

whenever i look at you,
my chest is tight I cannot speak.
I've never known feelings like this,
I don't know what to say.
I stand out in the rain wondering,
if you would be mine?

kinda crappy i know lol

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

awwww.....thats so sweet .

just to stay on topic.....

Why do you cry my angel ?
Why do you look so sad ?
Not all is lost
Its not that bad
Dry your tears
What good will they do ?
Will they stop your fears ?
Will they bring me back ?
No , im gone , not coming back
not coming home ,
But im still here
Your not alone
You will never be alone

that took me all of five minutes to write .

[Nova_Eclipse]

awww I like it cherry ^^ your really good at these

[KotokoPlum]

Aw! You guys have the sweetest poems... I'll see what I can find... *rummages through stuff*

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

wow.....thanks ...im speechless...for once ..yours was really good too .

[Nova_Eclipse]

aw stop it cherry your going to make me blush lol

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

... i have a poem that is very long..i mean about a page and a half...im just considering wether to post it or not...should i...shouldnt i...hmmmm..

[SilentSoul92]

Star Ocean rant time

Look out into darkness
Look out into space
See beyond the endless abyss
See beyond what's in front of your face
Reach and touch the glimmering lights
Reach out and touch this place
Hear the angelic choir singing
Hear the twinkling vansh without trace
Look out into the star
The beautiful ocean of stars

STAR OCEAN!!! *goes beserk* do not get me started on how fun that game is. For anyone who knows me, they know I'm obssesed with that game (I have a 10 page summary on Star Ocean 1 ^^

[KotokoPlum]

Nice poem! ^^

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

very nice ^_^

[Nova_Eclipse]

lol I know what you mean Rita i only have the third star ocean but im hooked on it lol

[KotokoPlum]

O.O Three Star Oceans?! I've only seen star Ocean :Till the End of Time and I really want it, but... no money left...lol
(What's the first one called? And the second? Third? Oh, well, might as well ask... foruth?)

[cherry-chi-hiwatari]

so many times ,
have i walked these halls
passed by your open door
can you hear me ?
my silent screams
can you see me ?
my silent prayers
do you know me ?
my silent suffering
do i exist to you ?
my silent suicide .
can you see the tears ,
i weep over you?
can you see the pain ?
do you hear me when i falter ?
would you catch me if i fall?
do i exist to you ?
exist at all ?
would you notice if i stayed ?
would you care if i went ?
do you know how much you hurt me ?
without saying any words at all
do you hear my sobs at night ,
when i wake from my dreams ,?
do you hear the prayers ,
that surroud me in the dark ?
do you care how much ,
You hurt and scold me ?
have you known ,
anything like my pain ?
my salty tears wont change this ,
my desperate prayers wont resolve this ,
my silent screams wont alert you to me ,
my suffering will continue ,
my suicide will not change any of this ,
you wont remember me when im gone ,
i shall not remain in your memory ,
you wont even recognise my name,
will you think of me when your alone ?
think of me when you see flowers ?
think of me in the sea breeze ?
think of me in a howling wind ?
think when you need a friend ?
will you think of me at all ?
you say me , but you dont ,
you dont know what i am ,
you dont know who i am ,
you dont know where i am ,
you do not know my soul.
my heart was yours to take ,
my soul was offered so willingly ,
my life was there for you to have ,
but you ignored it all ,
passed me by ,
without a glance ,
without a thought ,
now i say goodbye ,
think of me when you are alone
think of me when you see flowers ,
think of me in the sea breeze
think of me in the howling wind
think of me when you need a friend ,
think of me , if you can.




.....erm...yeah...i said it was long........very...very.....very long...