Post Your Poems!

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject:

can anyone guess the hidden story under my poem. only one of the judges noticed it Surprised

KotokoPlum · Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 12:11 pm Post subject:

Life and death?

LiYang · Site Helper Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 133

Catch your tears as they fall,
into the palm of my hand they gather,
nestling together like diamonds,
scatter them against the night ceiling,
your stars of tear, my star of tears,
remember right now, around the world they go.
Becoming a ring on the world,
flowing in the moonlight,
diving into shadows,
where I am your sihlouette,
who stole the stars from your tears
in the stillness of time.
_________________
I hate you. That's all.

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 9:45 pm Post subject:

awesome poem Liyang. Eh, you guys are close, really close, not quite dying, think along the lines of, already dead.

LiYang · Site Helper Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 133

Ah, lately my muse has been quite nice to me, well, at least in regards to writing. So basically I've been writing poems more often. This is the first I wrote a week back or so.

In the spacious night sky,
stars sparkle like diamionds on velvet.
And there is the Milky Way, river flowing,
running along across the dark expanse.
Spanning time and space,
for years gone yonder and come to now.
Among these diamonds is one that shines brighter.
A shooting star streaks across the void,
holding wishes to be fulfilled,
leaving a trail of stardust in its wake.
The sparkling dust floats down from the heavens,
swirling to and fro in the wind,
as the faeries gather the glitter to use as theirs.
Twirling and spiraling throughout the Elysium Fields,
that which was not reaped, turns to sparkling dew.
Settling on the weeping lilies like teardrops
fallen from the cheeks of a maiden,
who's wish flies aloft on starfire and brimstone,
through the shadows of the night.
Sailing on the sea of eternity.
_________________
I hate you. That's all.

hikari0205 · Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 4:49 am Post subject:

erm i made up this poem for cherry-chi-hiwatari when she was going to write a harry potter fanfiction . its terrible and it is about how much lupin loves sirius.

Padfoot is my only love,
He must be an angel from above,
all alone in space and time
he greets me with
a winking eye
its only comfort calling you
cuz theres nothing else to do
when can i say the words
i love you ?
do you love me ?
cuz i love you
you ,james peter and me
the best gang on earth
everyone can see
the greatest friends
a werewolf could have
you stuck by me even when
i was mad
do you love me ?
cuz i love you
i know im selfish , im unkind
to want you right here by my side
but sirius , my love , its true
there is no one thats beeter than you
ill follow you to the ends of time
i wonder if you heard my rhyme .

told ya it was terrible o well..............cherry liked it ^_^

KotokoPlum · Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 7:25 am Post subject:

Wow. Grat job, LiYang. O.O And that was fine, hikari. ^^ No worries. Mine was waay worse. Laughing

hikari0205 · Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 8:22 am Post subject:

yea that was a great poem LiYang....thanx Kotoko but it really was terrible Laughing

LiYang · Site Helper Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 133

Three more poems, I just need to find where I put my other ones...e.e;;

Broken mirror, a million shades of light,
a myriad of reflections falling from grace.
A million shades of the same soul,
hidden deep within the depths of self.
A rare aurora only seen in perfect conditions,
spilling out in a deluge of color,
over the star sprinkled sky above.
Twisting and turning, this way and that,
reflecting upon itself in an infinite weave.
Shattered shards mirroring each other,
light upon light, shadow upon shadow,
all falling into the embrace of silvered mercury,
deeper and deeper, yet still visible on the surface.
Always there, always existing.
Hidden deep within the depth of self,
a million shades of the same soul.
A myriad of reflections falling from grace,
broken mirror, a million shades of light.

Blowing in from the northern lands,
the mistral gale tearing through the valleys.
Whistling along and rustling leaves,
carrying whispers between star-crossed lovers.
A gentle brush running along a cheek,
an electric touch passing through the scalp,
a soft pressure against lips of cherry.
Flowing and touching in an intimate caress,
submitting to the rushing air,
until the winds become calm once more.

And there you were, killing me
in a moment with a knife and a rose
in your smile. Falling into you,
my heart is in your hands
without you knowing.
Friends we became and
friends we remain.
With you unaware of my love,
this dull unrequited ache swirling
together with the warmth of
our companionship.
Blurring into an amalgamation
of muted hues.
Creating a work of art,
that I will forever treasure.
_________________
I hate you. That's all.

KotokoPlum · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 5:15 am Post subject:

Wow. Liyang, you are really good at this! ^^

hikari0205 · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 7:01 am Post subject:

yea i like ure poems alot Li ^_^

cherry-chi-hiwatari · Forum Stalker Joined: 23 Jan 2005 Posts: 1143

wow....wish i could write poems like that <_<

hikari0205 · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 8:19 am Post subject:

so do i

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 2:53 pm Post subject:

Whoppdie doo! my poems got put in a book and I have a copy. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

hikari0205 · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 4:59 pm Post subject:

they did?????? how cum? WTF?

i like ure poems Rita ^_^

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 7:04 pm Post subject:

it was this poetry contest, I got honary mention (unfortunately I didn't place) but as a prize, they got put in a book for people to check out in the library. ^^

Curses to those
Who cling to shadowed fates
Fire burn the souls
Of sinners and pure alike
Hear the death bells toll
The lightning drawing faint
A relazing evening stroll
Soon turned to doomed fate

cherry-chi-hiwatari · Forum Stalker Joined: 23 Jan 2005 Posts: 1143

wow ..i love your poems rita

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 9:19 am Post subject:

thanks, unfortunately, most of them are really short...^^; got to work on that...

A shattered mirror
One hundred cyrstals of ice
Thrown into the dark abyss
Slowly twinkle like guide lights
Small pebbles in
The ever flowind tide
Of a river from time and space
Now hear the angels sigh

KotokoPlum · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:31 pm Post subject:

But your poems are great! Yay!

Darkness1313 · Rookie Joined: 13 Mar 2005 Posts: 38

Wow! You guys can write really good. Well, here is one of my poems:
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Right now you are suffering,
And I am feeling it too.
When people say you're sleeping,
I'm scared that you won't awaken.
I tremble, stutter, cry,
But my emotions still stick.
As the days go by,
I swear I keep seeing you!
But no matter how far I walk,
No matter how fast I run,
I can't get to you.
I can't feel your warmth anymore!
What happened to you?
Where did you go?
I want to finally get to you...
To make sure you're all right.
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Yeah, that's it...