Post Your Poems!

hikari0205 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 1:56 pm Post subject:

cool i like it ^_^ write more sumtime

ZeroHourLP · Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: -172359

Haiku by Leonardo Priorio

"Pocket Monsters In the Pale Moon Light"

strawberry condoms
in ur momses purse and mouf
ur mom likes penilez

:J

"Common Bullshit"

i loved u so much
but u left and stole mai heart
i cry crimson teerz
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>:C

Darkness1313 · Rookie Joined: 13 Mar 2005 Posts: 38

Okay then...
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Sometimes I just really need to be alone.
Cause I hate it when people are so...
When they boss me around.
When they tell me what to do.
I'm not a baby!
I can handle my own life!
Sometimes they need to back up off me.
They need to give me some space,m
And they don't need to be so concerned about me.
I'm not the biggest deal here.
But I think the only reason I act like this,
Is because I actually am alone.
The main person in my life right now is hurt.
He is so very close to me.
And right now it feels like he's unreachable,
But I make believe that he is here.
I know that it isn't quite the same,
But it makes me feel not so alone.
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There...comments people! ^_^

hikari0205 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 3:18 pm Post subject:

that was absolutly brilliant. i really like it! i cant do poems to save my life Laughing

keep it up cuz they both sound great Wink

Darkness1313 · Rookie Joined: 13 Mar 2005 Posts: 38

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Why do your parent fight so much?
it makes me feel so uncomfortable.
I like spending time with all of you
I just wish they would get along more.
I know you love them
And I understand your bound well,
But they're pulling separate ways.
You've got to realize that.
I'm sorry that all this is happening to you.
I know it eats away at you,
But seriously face the facts
They're not going to be together much longer.
I don't know what more I can tell you
Just that I am so sorry.
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I wrote that because my BF has serious family issues. It so sad! Sad

hikari0205 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 3:32 pm Post subject:

im sorry bout your BF's family. i hope that they r ok. on a brighter note that was another great poem u r really good at this ^_^

Darkness1313 · Rookie Joined: 13 Mar 2005 Posts: 38

Thanks...I shal write more! Smile

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I know everything should be fine in the end,
But I can't help but to worry.
I know you were lucky,
But what if there's a next time?
What if you aren't so lucky?
I can't help thinking like this.
I guess it's cause I'm so scared inside,
And that will never change.
That emotion will tone down after a while,
But it will always remain within me.
Soon it'll come back when something else happens.
Something will happen again,
But who knows what it'll be,
Or even who it's gonna happen to.
Let's just hope that it won't happen for a long time.
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hikari0205 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 3:49 pm Post subject:

wow

that was amazing! where do u get the ideas for ure poems? do u have n y thing that inspires them or do u just write down wat u think? wateva u do they r brilliant Wink

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 5:27 pm Post subject:

ah, my muse has been very nice to me. I got 2nd place for a story contest. I think this calls for a poem! lol

Starlight burning
The silver moon shines
The tide is churning
The flow dies
A soft sweet melody
On angel wings fly
To the dark abyss
And dot the sky
Between day and night
Dark and light
Lie dawn and dusk
The rift above.

It's actually part of my story that got second place. IN YOU FACE ALICE!!! sorry, really annoying girl who kept nagging saying I wouldn't place. HA!! HA!!! HAAAAA!! sorry.

LiYang · Site Helper Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 133

Some great stuff coming along, let's keep it going.

Something currently in the works, needs to be finished obviously.

How exquisite this lunacy has become,
tripping over words, toppling over each other
tongue-tied falling head over heels.
Lips swollen cheeks flushed,
we've walked the edge of reason
and jumped head first off the precipice.
When all we wanted was to dream,
so much more was found,
our dreamer's passion became reality.
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I hate you. That's all.

_matt_ · Has No Life Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 582

War is bad
It makes me sad

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:37 pm Post subject:

well said matt, well said.

BloodandChocolate · Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 4:08 pm Post subject:

Hi My name is Boo. And i love to write poems and stories and I love to draw. This is one that I made up right now:

Death...What a sad word..but I love it...Death...it creeps...its stealthy...it strikes when you least expect it...
Its like a whisper...Behind you...you turn around...but its not there...It confuses you...lets you panic...then it strikes...
And guess what... its too late.

I have alot of poems but this is one that I made up really fast so I hope that it is atleast okay. Boo WTF?

Forest · Rookie Joined: 28 Mar 2005 Posts: 26

I wrote this when I was 14 for a national 50 word story/poem competition and I won joint first prize. Smile

~*Death*~

A shadow of fear.
Creeping, sliding, flying, speeding.
Stealth is its name and destruction is its nature.
A silken gloom, smelling out its victim.
Through the house, its adrenalin pumping.
Sleeping softly, there Angelique lay.
A feast in her skin, a luscious meal in her eyes.

It devours her breath.

~Forest

Powtaz · Oldbie Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 2140

i wrote this poem in about 4 seconds from now.

I stood on a tree, and alone.
You were staring at me, soooo cold.
I looked away to see, the phone.
then you were gone, i am alone.

The truck looked away, from sight.
It smashed into me, look! a light!
i'm dying this day, a fright Sad

Please give me some pay, I wont bite.

i'm dead!
im dead!
look at me im dead!

*drums* ZOMBIE!

OOOH BABY, IM A ZOMBIE! and i want to eat ur flesh!!!

AAAAHH, *ZOOOOOMBIES!!* OMG IM DECAYING ON U! AAAH ZOMBY LOVE :(

*guitar*

now im alive again,
and i cant see ur eyes,
please hold me....
my fellow zombie.

*tear*

cherry-chi-hiwatari · Forum Stalker Joined: 23 Jan 2005 Posts: 1143

very good pow , poor zombie

yours was really good forest .

cherry-chi-hiwatari · Forum Stalker Joined: 23 Jan 2005 Posts: 1143

wow...that was good , very long , but very good .

Barney--TheAnti-Christ · Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 9:47 pm Post subject:

Let me tell you about what you cannot see
Let me tell you every part of me
The clouds in the sky are my eyes
and the falling rain my tears
the chirping of the birds my voice
and the wind on th plains my ears
I am everywhere around you
in the ground water and sky
but don't ever fear my friend
I never said goodbye

that's a poem for my story. Just think about it a little, and you'll see what it means^^

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:08 pm Post subject:

29 sad.angry poems and counting. At least the growing rate slowed

Drumbeats, starlight
Silen empty light
The end draws near
The beginning is here
And now the wind sighs
What is time
To someone who died
A million years before
Or was it just yesterday?

SilentSoul92 · Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 11:29 pm Post subject:

*bump* heh sorry.