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Dr_Ice_Cube Very Oldbie

Joined: 14 Nov 2004 Posts: 2807 Location: The Penguin Realm of Dreams
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 1:48 pm Post subject: |
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hmm Jay id have to giv your art a..... 9 to a 9.5 its very good. heres mine... and remember its made on ms paint so giv me some slak _________________ [img]http://www.flashasylum.com/db/files/Comics/ComicaziRob20.jpg[/img] |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13721 Location: Moo
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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Okay... 2 out of 5. All I see are standard MS Paint colors, you do know how to mix your own, right? That would have made it worth a 3 / 5 (average).
I'm going to pick an old one because I haven't quite finished my next drawing:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-76723.html _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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xox_pyschosis_xox Newb

Joined: 05 Apr 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 5:04 pm Post subject: |
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the shadding is bloody excelent i could say its just about perfect except 4 1 thing.
the eyes r completly different shapes and sizes, its taking alot of my attention away from the rest of the pic cause they r so distracting. if it wasnt 4 that id give u 10 but i think an 8 n half.
heres mine......... |
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gothic_ginny Still very bored

Joined: 21 Aug 2004 Posts: 272
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 5:14 pm Post subject: |
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OOh, i love it. Very nice. Great shading, good anatomy. The clothes wrinkles add to it too. The blood looks real... and the background is cool. I love her expression, and how she's humming a tune .
Mine:
Envy from FMA _________________ "Pregnant?? We Can Help!"
"Hint: everything moves" |
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lucifer Very bored

Joined: 08 Aug 2004 Posts: 133
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L7 Very bored

Joined: 05 Sep 2004 Posts: 210
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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2.5/5. The head is a bit small. But the body is cool.
The Music |
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ElliChan Newb

Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 15
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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great pic L-chan ^_^ bout 7/10
mine turn~~ |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

Joined: 24 Sep 2004 Posts: 3100 Location: Lala land *hums*
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Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 11:09 pm Post subject: |
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Is that Rena from SO2? Anyways, good job, considering the POV was from the top. That angle is always hard (for me at least) the proportions seem pretty good, no big mistakes, and the coloring is good. 9/10 |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13721 Location: Moo
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 12:03 am Post subject: |
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[b]QUOTE[/b] (xox_pyschosis_xox) | the shadding is bloody excelent i could say its just about perfect except 4 1 thing.
the eyes r completly different shapes and sizes, its taking alot of my attention away from the rest of the pic cause they r so distracting. if it wasnt 4 that id give u 10 but i think an 8 n half.[/quote]
Are you referring to my drawing, or the MS Paint sketch above mine? Because, with regards to my last post....
- I didn't apply any shading to the creature. It's just pencil lineart, nothing more.
- Only one of the creature's eyes is actually visible to the camera.
Hmm. The last picture above mine that I see is ElliChan's. It looks like a 3 of 5 to me, but as I don't like seeing large attachments, better take it before I change my mind :lol:
And, as for me -- w00t! New stuff:
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xox_pyschosis_xox Newb

Joined: 05 Apr 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:39 am Post subject: |
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theres alot of detail which is a little distractive and overwhelming. alright shadding though. 7/10.
(yea i screwed up on the other pic of urs, i was lookin at the wrong pic on the wrong page lol)
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xox_pyschosis_xox Newb

Joined: 05 Apr 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:40 am Post subject: |
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s**t i put up the wrong pic, heres the 1 i ment to put up |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13721 Location: Moo
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 9:53 am Post subject: |
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FYI, please use the "edit" button if you need to update your post. Double-posts are not very attractive around here.
Hope you don't mind me removing that first image as it's not needed anymore. -_-
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VR_Jay Very Oldbie

Joined: 13 Apr 2004 Posts: 2725
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="Stratadrake (Strata)"] Are you referring to my drawing, or the MS Paint sketch above mine? Because, with regards to my last post....
- I didn't apply any shading to the creature. It's just pencil lineart, nothing more.
- Only one of the creature's eyes is actually visible to the camera. [/quote]
I think she's talking about mine because 1) my shading is bloody excelent and 2) the female elf's eyes are different sizes. Yeah, you are looking at her face from a 3/4 view, so I was going for foreshortening, but maybe I didn't pull it off as well as I would like to have hoped? Something to work on.
Anyways, since I am greatly confused as to who has rated what in the last few posts, I am going to start fresh with this one.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14815476/ _________________ [img]http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/Anti_Commecial_Banners_by_Nevar530.jpg[/img] [img]http://s2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/VR_Jay/th_myvsweetkiss1xc.gif[/img]
[color=black]"Your toast is burnt and no amount of scraping will remove the black stuff!" ~ Caboose, Red vs. Blue[/color] |
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HeavenlyKunoichi Very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 182
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Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 9:04 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="VR_Jay (Will)"] [quote="Stratadrake (Strata)"] Are you referring to my drawing, or the MS Paint sketch above mine? Because, with regards to my last post....
- I didn't apply any shading to the creature. It's just pencil lineart, nothing more.
- Only one of the creature's eyes is actually visible to the camera. [/quote]
I think she's talking about mine because 1) my shading is bloody excelent and 2) the female elf's eyes are different sizes. Yeah, you are looking at her face from a 3/4 view, so I was going for foreshortening, but maybe I didn't pull it off as well as I would like to have hoped? Something to work on.
Anyways, since I am greatly confused as to who has rated what in the last few posts, I am going to start fresh with this one.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14815476/ [/quote]
I like it, but I have to give it a 6/10. I don'tt want to sound harsh but something about it looks unfinished. Like you did the outline and you wanted to cleanup the lines and forgot or something. I think if you made the coloring and lineart not so pixelated it would jump up about 2 points
Here is my picture for the next person to rate
http://www.deviantart.com/view/18006178/ |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

Joined: 24 Sep 2004 Posts: 3100 Location: Lala land *hums*
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Posted: Fri May 06, 2005 9:58 pm Post subject: |
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should I crush you morale...hm, nah, ok. The porportions ok, though the feet could use some work (look at you feet, are they that big compared to your body?) I could say more but that would be pointing out every flaw, 7.8/20
I don't have a pic to critique, onto the next person if you will. |
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army19791031 Rookie

Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 32
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 2:58 am Post subject: |
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ok here is my 2 cent critique. like the head, hari, face. as you know the hands and feet on the chick on the block is lacking. something you should try is to draw and practice with line weight. that will make your drawing more 3D with out colors. then after you do that color it.
well later!
oh and here is an quick sketch drawing |
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HeavenlyKunoichi Very bored

Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 182
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 7:20 am Post subject: |
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[quote="army19791031 (Richard Reilly)"] ok here is my 2 cent critique. like the head, hari, face. as you know the hands and feet on the chick on the block is lacking. something you should try is to draw and practice with line weight. that will make your drawing more 3D with out colors. then after you do that color it.
well later!
oh and here is an quick sketch drawing [/quote]
I give it a 6/10
The head seems off, and his legs look weird (the lower leg looks really jagged O.o;;? is that the word?) But it is just a sketch so you can't expect amazing 10/10 art ^^;
Overall it would be like an 8/10 if you changed the head a ittle bit, and fixed up the feet and his left calf.
I have no particular picture I want rated so just pick one from my gallery or if you are too lazy you can just skip me |
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rikuschick Very bored

Joined: 22 Jul 2004 Posts: 148
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 4:32 pm Post subject: |
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well, I'll just rate your BoA-Quincy pic, then.^_^ I give it a 4/5. I really like the hair, my only suggestion would be to make the eyelashes look fuller. well, here's mine.. these are nicole1725's lines as you can tell by the comment I left on the pic. I just did the coloring in photoshop. |
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NeoCelestialStar Rookie

Joined: 17 Aug 2004 Posts: 37
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Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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Here's my thoughts on your pic "Midnight Magic". It's VERY well drawn! The coloring is gorgeous. I can't put my finger on what it is about the face that looks slightly out of place with the rest of the pic, but overall, this pic is beautiful! Great job! 9/10
Here's mine
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azure-draco Very bored

Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 177
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Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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I rate that Ranma pic a 4.5/5
first off, this is a very well-drawn pic! and the colors are great, and bright. the color scheme you chose is a very odd one, most people these days won't use the slate purple/blue with that tone of red, so this makes this pic more unique. besides, it is cute! If i had to say the bad thing about this, the only thing I could say is the face. The right eye looks strange..it's a bit smaller then the other eye and looks off-center.
nevertheless, it is still a very good piece :)
here is my pic- http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php...&picture=205343 . I'm begging you, PLEASE don't be too harsh. i've been going through terrible depressions lately (due to unhappiness of my art, health problems,and family problems) and the last thing I have to see is a harsh critique. |
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