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LunaticCrow Elder In Training

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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 9:58 am Post subject: |
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Seemed like a pretty generic start to a GW fanfic..
why dont you throw in some OCs?
and have them f**k the main characters?
It would be oh so thrilling.
eh, no, but seriously, I want to see how you tie this togther too..:\ _________________ [img]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c296/lunaticcrow/goodnight.jpg[/img] |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:01 am Post subject: |
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This goes in the Fancition Critiques section. |
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Sephir0th666777 Elder In Training

Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 3168 Location: *insert witty location here*
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 12:38 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] Seemed like a pretty generic start to a GW fanfic..
why dont you throw in some OCs?
and have them f**k the main characters?
It would be oh so thrilling.
eh, no, but seriously, I want to see how you tie this togther too..:\ [/quote]
Now THAT would be interesting _________________ [img]http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y148/Sephir0th666777/mercy.jpg[/img]
Red_Quatre:Who's the guy that says "Get over here!" and then grabs you.
Blad: A rapist |
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LunaticCrow Elder In Training

Joined: 29 Aug 2005 Posts: 3817 Location: up Fayore's skirt, riding in her catbus ;D
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:35 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] Now THAT would be interesting [/quote]
Most definetly.
Have a girl who is..Quatre's sister, fall madly in love with Trowa, have them screw around for a bit, and once Quatre's said sister gets pregnant, Trowa marries her and then conitnue the fic on about their lives together from that point onward,
THE EDN.
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Sephir0th666777 Elder In Training

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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D
The plot thickens... _________________ [img]http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y148/Sephir0th666777/mercy.jpg[/img]
Red_Quatre:Who's the guy that says "Get over here!" and then grabs you.
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LuverOfQuatre45 Rookie

Joined: 13 Aug 2005 Posts: 26
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:41 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="SilentSoul92 (Rita)"] This goes in the Fancition Critiques section. [/quote]
I know. I know. I meant to put it there but i placed it here on accident.
Also, the second chapter should be up by tommorow. |
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LunaticCrow Elder In Training

Joined: 29 Aug 2005 Posts: 3817 Location: up Fayore's skirt, riding in her catbus ;D
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 2:18 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D
The plot thickens... [/quote]
Yes, and then, they all beat the s**t out of eachother, To Fight over who gets Quatre's sister, who is conveiently named 'Quartet'.
Quatre wins, 'cause everyone who did Quartet werent impressed, even Relena was put off, and they all agree that incest is TOTALLY HOT.
Best. Fic. Ever. _________________ [img]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c296/lunaticcrow/goodnight.jpg[/img] |
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Sephir0th666777 Elder In Training

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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 2:26 am Post subject: |
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[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] [quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D
The plot thickens... [/quote]
Yes, and then, they all beat the s**t out of eachother, To Fight over who gets Quatre's sister, who is conveiently named 'Quartet'.
Quatre wins, 'cause everyone who did Quartet werent impressed, even Relena was put off, and they all agree that incest is TOTALLY HOT.
Best. Fic. Ever. [/quote]
But then, Neo Zeon challenges to drop a colony on earth if she is not givin to them.
For Sexual purposes _________________ [img]http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y148/Sephir0th666777/mercy.jpg[/img]
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LunaticCrow Elder In Training

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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 6:13 am Post subject: |
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[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] For Sexual purposes [/quote]
Of course.
Why dont we just get some tentacle monsters in here for the heck of it? :\ Make it a Gundam/La Blue Girl Crossover. _________________ [img]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c296/lunaticcrow/goodnight.jpg[/img] |
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Sephir0th666777 Elder In Training

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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] [quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] For Sexual purposes [/quote]
Of course.
Why dont we just get some tentacle monsters in here for the heck of it? :\ Make it a Gundam/La Blue Girl Crossover. [/quote]
But then the colony is actualy....A giant space dildo! _________________ [img]http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y148/Sephir0th666777/mercy.jpg[/img]
Red_Quatre:Who's the guy that says "Get over here!" and then grabs you.
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Son_of_God Still very bored

Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Posts: 350
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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[i]not funny, Sir Spam-A-Lot[/i] _________________ Pie? |
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SilentSoul92 Elder In Training

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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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Oy, can one of the mods please clean up the spam posts and move this to the Fanfic critiques sections? Please? |
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LuverOfQuatre45 Rookie

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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:07 am Post subject: |
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Or Edwyn can burn both Tyler and Brad on Skewers! Yes will a Mod please clean this up.
Anyways, the second chapter is up. I told you all I'd manadge to finish it. And I did it alot quicker than I thought I would. |
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