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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 9:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seemed like a pretty generic start to a GW fanfic..

why dont you throw in some OCs?

and have them f**k the main characters?

It would be oh so thrilling.

eh, no, but seriously, I want to see how you tie this togther too..:\
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This goes in the Fancition Critiques section.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 12:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] Seemed like a pretty generic start to a GW fanfic..

why dont you throw in some OCs?

and have them f**k the main characters?

It would be oh so thrilling.

eh, no, but seriously, I want to see how you tie this togther too..:\ [/quote]
Now THAT would be interesting Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 1:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] Now THAT would be interesting Wink [/quote]
Most definetly.

Have a girl who is..Quatre's sister, fall madly in love with Trowa, have them screw around for a bit, and once Quatre's said sister gets pregnant, Trowa marries her and then conitnue the fic on about their lives together from that point onward,

THE EDN.

:huh:
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D

The plot thickens...
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="SilentSoul92 (Rita)"] This goes in the Fancition Critiques section. [/quote]
I know. I know. I meant to put it there but i placed it here on accident.

Also, the second chapter should be up by tommorow.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 2:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D

The plot thickens... [/quote]
Yes, and then, they all beat the s**t out of eachother, To Fight over who gets Quatre's sister, who is conveiently named 'Quartet'.

Quatre wins, 'cause everyone who did Quartet werent impressed, even Relena was put off, and they all agree that incest is TOTALLY HOT.

Laughing Best. Fic. Ever.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 2:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] [quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] But then, Trowa finds out she is also screwing Heero and Quatre. :D

The plot thickens... [/quote]
Yes, and then, they all beat the s**t out of eachother, To Fight over who gets Quatre's sister, who is conveiently named 'Quartet'.

Quatre wins, 'cause everyone who did Quartet werent impressed, even Relena was put off, and they all agree that incest is TOTALLY HOT.

Laughing Best. Fic. Ever. [/quote]
But then, Neo Zeon challenges to drop a colony on earth if she is not givin to them.


For Sexual purposes Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 6:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] For Sexual purposes Wink [/quote]
Of course.

Why dont we just get some tentacle monsters in here for the heck of it? :\ Make it a Gundam/La Blue Girl Crossover. Laughing
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 1:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="LunaticCrow (Brad Kirstein)"] [quote="Sephir0th666777 (Tyler)"] For Sexual purposes Wink [/quote]
Of course.

Why dont we just get some tentacle monsters in here for the heck of it? :\ Make it a Gundam/La Blue Girl Crossover. Laughing [/quote]
But then the colony is actualy....A giant space dildo!
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[i]not funny, Sir Spam-A-Lot[/i]
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 10:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oy, can one of the mods please clean up the spam posts and move this to the Fanfic critiques sections? Please?
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Or Edwyn can burn both Tyler and Brad on Skewers! Yes will a Mod please clean this up.

Anyways, the second chapter is up. I told you all I'd manadge to finish it. And I did it alot quicker than I thought I would.
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