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This isn't fan fiction, but it's a story. Trying to get it published, but I need feedback on the chapters so I can further the progression of it. Please, could someone go look at my story Sword of Ages and tell me what you think? Any comments would be helpful.  |
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falkonns_flight
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http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-31750.html
That's the link for the first chapter. The one you looked at is still in the works. 
Sorry for the confusion
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