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DemonRaven
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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 10:03 am    Post subject: Alone Reply with quote

[b]Nobody truly knows, but us.
How dark and lonely the world is.
We see in Black but not in White.
We don't understand anyone, not even ourselves.
This is how are world is.
We are left in the dark.
With the worst of Monsters.
We are hopelessy alone.
In a dark and scary world that doesen't understand us.
We don't know eachother.
But know how we all feel.
It is the same everywhere.
No one can help us.
Docters,medications, hospitals.
They are as bad as being alone in the dark.
We are different.
Most don't care,but some do.
Those who are blinded by the light ,
I am not one of them.
But those blinded by the darkness.
I have no advice for those who aren't like me.

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NicholasDWolfwood
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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good. Emo, but good none the less.

Write something a little lighter, though.
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Sam400
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah that [i]is[/i] pretty emo-ish. good job though
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Morbidmauler
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i lurvs the emo. its a really good piece. Smile ans Shadow kicks ass, btw.
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