Anceint Chaos

[Defender_of_Darkness]

Ancient Choas

Throft Jolted down on a Sturdy piece of wood, that split easyly with the strength of Throft, and his dwarfen kind. Throft Quietly looked around at the other dwarfs, Spliting the wood with one hand, and the occasional wipe of the forhead. Throft set down his axe and went over to the springs, were the dwarfs bathed. He waded into the water and all of the stress seemed to wash of his face. As a face of great satisfaction filled his face.Another days work, Done.Thought Throft. It seemed like in hour in the water, the cold current pressing against his Torn brown work clothes. He again looked at the workers, now they too were setting their axes down and ethier going home or heading his way to bathe.
Throft lifed himself out of the water and began to walk home. He walked down the path, looking only at the passing markets,and its customers. He then walked out of the market and into the village of the dwarfs. Each house was made by its owner, or their ancestors. He walked to the house made by Throft himself. He threw open the door and sat down at the table. His dirty hands covered his face.
"Are you ok, sir?" asked Jalil, his buttler you could say.
"Fine, fine. But I wouldnt mind a cup of tea and some cake, if we got it of course." said Throft.
Jalil nodded and walked to the cubbard and started to make the tea.
"Thank you, Jalil."said Throft
"Most gracious milord, Rough day?"Said Jalil.
"Yes, we worked most hard today. But its not that,that is bothering me. It is the mountains, They moan my name, every time i look at them. I yurn for adventure. And i need to gather enough money to buy me a good set of armor and a new hammer." said Throft tierdly.
Jalil nodded and poured the tea gently in the cup in front of him. Throft nodded in thanks and took sips of the tea.
If only I could get in thoughs mountains, or even over them, into other races territorys, i will be happy till the day they burry me...thought Throft.
That thought was stuck in Throfts head all that night....till Something did happen that did do exsactly that.

Throft woke up very elert. Someone screamed, It was Jalil. Throft thrust himself out of the bed. Quickly grasped his hand around the large handle of his beatten-up War hammer. Throft Walked over to the entrace of his room. He did a quick glace into the room. Throft spotted five goblins, two orcs, and jalil. Throft Jumped out of the door, Trusting his hammer into one of the goblins chest. He staggered backwards, as the dwarf swung hard against another, in which that orc went flying. He did the same to all of the other, apparent enemys.
"Jalil, you ok?"muttered Throft out of his heavy breath.
Jalil nodded. Then Throft walked out of the door amd instantly say the village burning to the ground. Dwarfs that were fallen were now being steped on and kicked by Fleeing dwarfs. Throfts Brow narrowed into an outraged look. Throft then completely changed, from a nice, polite Dwarf into a Raged filled, Kill-anything-in-sight looking dwarf.
Throft quickly took down another six goblins, as the others fled.
"ah, yes another brave little warrior."Said a very tall orc hideing behind an army of tweleve or so goblins.
"Wound him, then bring me his weopon so that i may kill him with his own weopon."Said the tall orc.

hope you injoy. It all i got for now.

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