..can Someone Help Me W/ My Inuyasha Story?...

[inuyashas5best5friend]

Pleaseeeee help me with where I left off!!! I've completely ran out of ideas, and I need help. If you help me, I'll show your name at the bottom of the screen/story, telling you helped me!...you'll probably have to read it first though. I'l post is in a link right here ^_^

[Melahan]

hmmm few suggestions first before the ideas.. umm go into just a bit more description on the actions of people.... just an opinion. umm okay but about ideas, Naraku is talking to Sessy right? Well have him beat up Sessy and let him just escape with his life. He goes off and Rin finds him. She tries helping him back but can't go real fast. They come across Kagome on her way home, she and inuyasha had a fight and he asked her to stay. she wouldn't stay unless he had a reason for her to that didn't deal with the jewel shards. He won't answer and she takes off and runs into them and decides to help them and takes them back to Kaede. Inuyasha jumps up and smells kagome... then he smells sessy. he runs out expecting to fight him and is startled by her helping him. he is shocked at first then pissed, and refuses to help. they get sessy in and bandage him up. Inuyasha is upset that she is staying until sessy gets better. Inu takes off to a nearby river/lake/pond thing and sits to contemplate the feelings. Kagome decides to go for a walk to clean her clothes and wash away sessy's blood. Inuyasha hides to watch her so that he might figure her out. she strips down and starts bathing then kouga comes out of nowhere claming that he's going to take her once and for all. Kagome tries to get him to go away and she can't. he tries to force himself on her and inuyasha jumps out to go save her. they fight and during the time someone grabs kagome which distracts inuyasha, kouga hits him in the head and he falls back floating in the water... well that's all for now, let me know what you think and I'll help more when I can

[inuyashas5best5friend]

O.k! i'll add that stuff to the story..just onequestion... Is kagome nude ??? ..i mean during the inuyasha jumps out part...oh yeah, i'll get in deep crap if i .. write anything sorta....sexual content-ish.... but i'll pretty much add the stuff youy just toldme! thx much!!!!