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trueliesaa Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 24 Oct 2005 Posts: 984
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 2:13 pm Post subject: wild eyes |
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Wild eyes
natural beauty beyond compare
boundless power thrives
the truth that I see I found there
within your wild eyes
wild eyes cut me down to size and turn me inside out
wild eyes cast away the lies show me truth without a doubt
you will not be tainted by these echoes of the past
they were not vain those who died their legacy will last
a world made anew where nature’s hope can rise
everything reflected in those great and wild eyes
wild eyes cut me down to size and turn me inside out
wild eyes cast away the lies show me truth without a doubt x2 _________________ http://www.skjeret.com/images/WindWaker/NintendoGallery/G4/Mothula.jpg |
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Morbidmauler Oldbie
Joined: 06 Feb 2006 Posts: 2487 Location: wouldnt you like to know
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:40 pm Post subject: |
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wow, this is awesome! i really like it. you are an amazing writer! _________________ "We wake up in the morning and piss excellence"- some of my buddies. lol. |
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trueliesaa Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 24 Oct 2005 Posts: 984
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Rancor125 Very bored
Joined: 14 Mar 2006 Posts: 249 Location: In hostile territories
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:15 am Post subject: |
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Hey. I got your message. I think it's great! It's better than me, anyway. Keep going! Your adept at poetry!
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NicholasDWolfwood Elder In Training
Joined: 20 May 2006 Posts: 3565 Location: The World that Never Was
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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Forget the poetry, try your hand at songwriting (though they are basicly the same...) _________________ -<|>-________-<|>-
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq6q8fU9PiM
There's no I in Team. There's a Me though if you jumble it up.- Dr. House
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