Out of character?

Lasher · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:43 pm Post subject: Out of character?

Ever had a moment, or noticed someone having a moment, where they're sort of...not acting/talking like their normal selves.

[quote]This is amazing. I'm not very good at reviewing fanfics... i think this may be the first full one I've read without getting bored and annoyed Smile

This is awesome stuff. The first paragraph totally just pulls you in without any effort. Some stories you just hope and pray for something to catch you attention, but in the first sentence you manage to do that with your amazing descriptions of everything. You don't tell.... you show... Smile

And I have to say that most of this is much better than the romance novels I've seen. It's describing moments that can very easily come across as too fake or much too cheeeeezzzzzzzzy. But this is all so real... even with the damn fangs Smile

It makes me wanna go have a real moment with my man.... but it's late... and the sailor moon section calls Smile

Once again though this is really good stuff! I'm sorry if my review stinks... I suck at writing... and you don't Smile

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Post replies...and guess who *points above* I'd like to see if the person who wrote it remembers. Found it this past weekend looking at old junk in the closet so to speak. You find good stuff though it turns out from time to time.

Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

I bet Phunky Munky wrote that.
Seems like the weird shit he does.
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Lasher · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:53 pm Post subject:

So far off! So very far off! Laughing

It's something the person normally wouldn't say. Think opposite. "out of character" after all.

London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Layz.
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Lasher · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:59 pm Post subject:

[quote="London"]Layz.[/quote]

If i had a grand prize i'd give it to you but i don't have jack shit. Nice job though.

Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

I have bad reading comprehension skills.
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London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Probably female sailor moon fan. Nobody else came to mind.

Sweet.
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Lasher · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:09 pm Post subject:

[quote="London"]Probably female sailor moon fan. Nobody else came to mind.

Sweet.[/quote]

Yeah, she did all the sorting of sailor moon while i did all of Inuyasha back in the day (like 3 years ago...) when i was part of the staff but wow! I just made myself feel OLD....

A little off topic i know but you aren't from northern jersey are you London....sussex, morris, hunterdon county like....mt.olilve, denville, hackettstown, east hanover etc That would just be creppy Shocked

Where is the paris slut anyways

London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Nope. Why? I live in Monmouth:

[img]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e9/Map_of_New_Jersey_highlighting_Monmouth_County.svg/120px-Map_of_New_Jersey_highlighting_Monmouth_County.svg.png[/img]
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Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

Is jersey as bad as everyone says it is?
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London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Air quality ain't great, but it doesn't smell monstrously. It's nice being so close to New York, Philly, and the beach. I can't really speak for all of New Jersey, since I live in one of the nicer areas. :x
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Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

If you want nice air, come to Flagstaff.
I've never heard good things about Jersey, but I guess its a state people just like to make fun of.
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London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

[i]Fucking[/i] Ohio. :D

*shrug* We've got gangsters and stuff. We've got the biggest baddest roller coaster in the world. We've got a lot of people who want city salaries but a suburban lifestyle. Whatever. I'd much rather be here than, like, Mississippi or Nebraska.
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Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

No I live in Arizona.
I mean, its nice having tap water that is fresher than arrowhead, but I would like to go back to Ohio where there are more than two types of trees.
You know what state sucks? When we drove back from Ohio this summer, we passed through Illinois.
We went t Dairy Queen. It had a pamphlet-ish thing about all of the exciting things in Illinois.
These include
- Gangs
- Riots
- Abraham Lincoln
-[b] The KKK[/b]
Hell, there were about five other things, which weren't very exciting. Most of the things they bragged about fell along the lines of gangs and riots.
At least they're honest.
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PhunkYMunkY · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:09 pm Post subject:

hahah I knew that was Layz first time I looked. Excessive emoticon use.

Good times. <3

PhunkYMunkY · Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:10 pm Post subject:

When I say excessive.. I mean 5.. but yeah.. just.. yeah.

Layz is silly <3

London · Moderator Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474

Lol Illinois. I suppose those things are 'exciting.' Lived there 'till I was four (and I remember next to nothing). I've yet to go back.

I know you live in Arizona. You mention it in, like, every other post.
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Benk · Elder In Training Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 3733

Thats how much I hate the damned state
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Lasher · Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 2:59 am Post subject:

Nope. I'm in Sussex County, that's the very top and left one for all the none jersey people. I don't have a pretty little map like london to show off with. I use to live in Union county though, just two up from where you are.

Summit, New Jersey...Where a 2 bedroom 1 and half bath house can easily sell for 1.8 million...my neighbors house did Shocked

And i'm originally from the midwest so that's just freakin crazy. You could get that for $50,000 where i'm from. Blah.

Jersey ain't near as bad as people say. I grew up hearing it was a dump wasteland. It's nice though. Hilly, worst drivers ever (that's true) and people just don't know how to be friendly in general unless your kids go to the same private school etc. Otherwise it's good. I guess.

Gray - your a smart one Smile

NekoNinja · Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:16 pm Post subject:

[quote]f***ing Ohio. Very Happy

*shrug* We've got gangsters and stuff. We've got the biggest baddest roller coaster in the world. We've got a lot of people who want city salaries but a suburban lifestyle. Whatever. I'd much rather be here than, like, Mississippi or Nebraska.[/quote]

Nothing cool ever happens in Ohio.