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Shadow-Lugia-XD001 Newb
Joined: 14 Aug 2009 Posts: 21
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 4:59 pm Post subject: What do I need to improve on? |
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What are the techniques I need to improve on?
1.Shading (Hatching, Cross-hatching,Blending, and Stumping)
2.Details
3.Lines (Such as horizontal, Vertical, Zigzag, and Curved)
4.Positions
If there are some techniques that I need to work on that are not listed please tell me. |
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ThomYorke I dream of mod position
Joined: 07 Oct 2007 Posts: 2368 Location: Flagstaff, Arizona
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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Everything you can think of. Also, the positions your characters are in look stiff and unnatural. _________________ ゚ ヮ゚ |
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Shadow-Lugia-XD001 Newb
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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Okay..... Any one else? O_O; |
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Sorceress_Ultimecia Very bored
Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 148 Location: Denis's Panties
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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You're kind of drawing little animal things however they do look very unnatural. What I would do is look at anatomy of an animal with similar workings as what I'm trying to create. Secondly, your shading is simply off. There's not really any light source. First you have to think of what kind of effect you want for your composition, secondly, decide where this light is coming from and base your shadows off of that. _________________ [img]http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/nonkimono1/as.gif[/img]
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