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amanga Rookie
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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the good-
i love the colors they are very well used, it looks like you thought about what colors you were going to use insted of saying WHEEEE PINK.
the bad-
the way hes holding the staff, it looks silghtly unatural. but other wise it is a very good picture.
i use a digatal camara too i know how blury those things are
now heres my pic its yoai, |
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DragonicFlames Very Oldbie
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Posts: 2562 Location: Hiding behind a tombstone
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 5:45 am Post subject: |
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The good:
-the page coloring (was it supposed to be brown? Anyway awresome!)
-like the pose..
- Yay cool clothes
The bad:
- The heads seem a bit big for their bodies.
-The hands are a little bit too small. (check your own hand out. Put it palm to your face and see that it's about that same size as your face)
(Oh yesh the horrors of a digital camera. )
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-241409.html _________________ [img]http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b362/Dragonicflamesfac/DFsig2.jpg[/img]
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Brianhjh
Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 8014 Location: Queen's University
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 8:36 am Post subject: |
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The goods
-Composition and the anatomy in overall looks right
-cool boots or someting I don't know.
The bads
- Again, blurry (Doesn't scanner cost less than Dika?)
-the facial expression is... I don't know, UNORTHODOX
-and overall impression of the picture isn't spectacular, nothing is one focus, really, it's just a girl (a guy perhaps) standing.
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-158693.html
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Nooru Very bored
Joined: 25 Apr 2005 Posts: 152
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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Good:
the beautiful lively colors (red, blue, yellow). It make the pic seems alive ^_^
I like the pose
you did an background for this picture
Bad:
The right foot is smaller then the left
the coloring on a few place. (ex: left leg) seem to be done kinda fast. We can see the markers stokes.....(maybe it's a style...or the effect you want to give...)
anyway
next person, please critique this pic
http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php...&picture=244625
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DragonicFlames Very Oldbie
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Posts: 2562 Location: Hiding behind a tombstone
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2005 9:59 am Post subject: |
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The Good:
-She's not a skinny noodle. Yay! ^^
- The detail is interesting.
The Bad:
- The legs. They seem to be going in some odd direction that a leg can't go into. They don't follow the pose very well.
- The hand seems a little off. When people normally rest their hands on their hips they don't have the hand up and you see every finger. Its only a couple fingers and the side of the palm you see. Unless the palm is touching the body.. then the fingers grip the body.
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DF's pic:
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eidan_eishou Very bored
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 120
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:26 am Post subject: |
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Good points:
The body proportions are good
You have a nice coloring an shading
Bad poibts:
The left (his left) hand seems a bit odd
Also it's a bit blurry, but since you use a digital camera, I'm not going to bug you about it too much.
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firewingneko Forum contributor
Joined: 12 Aug 2004 Posts: 765 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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Good points:
-Great details
-The shadings in the hair are nice
-great overall looking
-The proportions are good
Bad points:
-Maybe you could put in some color
-There is no shade in the rest of the drawing
Some of my work: Click _________________ I know, my sig sucks. So what? |
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amanga Rookie
Joined: 26 Mar 2005 Posts: 32
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:00 pm Post subject: |
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the good-
very nice praportions,
looks very really,
great detail,
i love the feathers, they look real with out looking to real,
the bad-
the bottom of the pic gets very counfusing and i can't really tell what is tail legs and the such
but is very good.
here is mine. its of me whe |
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Nooru Very bored
Joined: 25 Apr 2005 Posts: 152
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:50 pm Post subject: |
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bad:
it's not clear....(digital camera?)
The foldes aren't correct...kinda weird?
the hair...at the ends. make them the same lengh might make it better?...
the eye is placed too high...
the thumb is too small
Good:
you put light on the hair
the proportions are good
anyway...sorry if I sound rash...XD
it's a nice pic overal though...I'm really pointing at really small mistakes...
anyway
here is mine...
http://fanart-central.net/pic-234725.html |
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OMNI-X Very bored
Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 141
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 10:58 am Post subject: |
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That's very well done.
The colors are very nice, and aren't painful to the eyes. The background is a very nice compliment to the leather (?) jacket that your character is wearing.
My only nitpick would be the fingers. They could use a little work. :)
Overall, I'd give you a 4/5.
Very nice work on the folors and the costume!
This is mine:
Mini Babes & Blades |
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Rindi_chan Forum contributor
Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Posts: 696 Location: Nara, Japan
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:52 pm Post subject: |
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Ahahaha... Yet another fantastic piece, OMNI-X. Love the detailing you've got going there... Fayth's hairstyle is really sweet. Oh, and I really like how you made the lettering appear to be pushing up out of the ground.
Anyway, the picture could definitely benefit from some more shading, as well as a more substantial background. I know you said the picture was rushed (so much detail for a rushed picture if you ask me - how long did it take you?), but after seeing all the work you put in... I couldn't help feeling slightly disappointed by the simplicity of the sky and the birds. Meh, I know, I'm just being nitpicky.
Fayth's left arm (the one with the dagger) feels a bit odd to me - like maybe the shoulder's too far out from the body. That's the only thing that bothers me though - I like the poses, the stances, the properly balanced weight, the perspective on the double-bladed sword... *jealous of your perspective abilities*
Ohhh... Just noticed the little fang things on Malaya's boots. Awesome! I like your take on SD - it's cute, it's definitely SD, but it still manages to retain that 'sexy yet dangerous' feeling that I've seen in all your Babes and Blades pictures. Great job!
Would someone mind doing a color critique on this picture? I know that I screwed up here and there with proportions and balance, but I'm especially looking for suggestions on a more convincing method for shading black. Black leather versus black metal to be more precise. Ehh... if that's too difficult, then feel free to just go and rip the picture apart. XD |
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sephiroth_partner Member
Joined: 17 Jul 2005 Posts: 47
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 3:02 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah !! I like the features !! it's pretty good I think I like this style. I never seen one like this before, but I like it. |
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Brianhjh
Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 8014 Location: Queen's University
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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My sister sez,
These characters look scary, do they, liike have no pupils or something????? :wacko:
Anyway, very well colored, you used colored pencil for this? but you still used that prismacolor blender-thing, right? it looks too blended for colored pencils. (not saying the picture's bad, no no) I like how the picture is organized, if it had a background of some sort, I would have thought it was a real FFVII concept art, no kidding.
anyway, 9.4/10
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Kori_Tae Rookie
Joined: 27 Jun 2004 Posts: 40
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Black-Bird Has No Life
Joined: 26 Dec 2004 Posts: 442 Location: Neverland
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:36 am Post subject: |
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Nice. I love the Grass. What did you do it on. Photoshop. The Character design is nice to. But the Picture lacks dimension a little. so 7/10
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Kori_Tae Rookie
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 2:18 am Post subject: |
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I agree with everything you said. I'm still learning, I know I'm not great... ^^"
I like the expression and her features are drawn well, especially the eyes and the hair. I love the shading too!
8/10
Critique this please! |
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wittlewabbit Rookie
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OMNI-X Very bored
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:31 am Post subject: |
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It looks nice, although the proportions can use a little work. The creases on the clothes look okay.
This is fairly nice work. Proportions are a little off, but overall a good job!
Here's mine:
Batman Begins Batmobile-Robo
This is an entry to a contest over at another BBS. The subject is to create a Transformer version of the Batman Begins Batmobile (The Tumbler). This is my version.
Enjoy!
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13710 Location: Moo
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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Did you say Transformer? I am [b]so[/b] there ^_^
Strong Points:
- Accurate sense of scale
- Great mechanical details
- I can almost visualize the transformation scheme....
Weak Points:
- On closer inspection, it looks a little back-heavy (I blame the combination of digitigrade feet and 'backpack' placement of the rear spoiler and wheels)
- I haven't seen the movie
Not Really A Weak Point:
- What if the robot mode actually resembled Batman's own look?
Overall:
Nothing really wrong here, so 5/5. Got color?
This is my latest, a take on one of BlackWolf's characters and completed within roughly a 24 hour time span. References included quick minisketches of BlackWolf's pictures of her character (for color and spot details), and an occasional glance at a pocketsized Wolves calendar (for proportions).
- Ready to Fly (full size - 75px/in) _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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OMNI-X Very bored
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:37 am Post subject: |
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[quote="Stratadrake (Strata)"] Weak Points:
- On closer inspection, it looks a little back-heavy (I blame the combination of digitigrade feet and 'backpack' placement of the rear spoiler and wheels)
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Sigh... unfortunately, the rules of the contest require a 'feasible' transformation with no 'animation magic' thrown in, and the robot must work within the confines of the official Matmobile Lineart we were presented with. <_<
Anywhoo, thanks for the nice comments, and score.
With regard to your blackwolf artwork, here's what I can say:
The Good:
- nice colored pencil work. wish I can do half as good
- the sunset effect (if that was what you were going for) looks nice
The Not-so-good:
- proportion. the head looks a tad too big
- still on proportion, the body is a little short. from my POV, the root of the wings should be a little behind the shoulder blades. this one looks like it's coming out of the neck.
Nicely colored work. Good background effects, porportions are off though.
3/5
Here's another contest entry of mine, although I never got this entered.
The theme of the contest was [i]'Favorite Super Robot Pilot Fanart'[/i]. This is my favorite pilot. Miria 639, from Macross: Ai, Oboeteimasuka? and that's her Queadluun Rau behind her.
Enjoy!
Miria 639 |
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